Cavernclan
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Thread Topic: Cavernclan
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S_E_ Novice"Aaah!" Pebblepaw dogded so her injury was minor. "Ow! That hurt!" She began to weep.
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Well yeah, I guess. I'm just saying if I were Ravenpaw I wouldn't tell anyone.)
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Yeah i guess. It was just a suggestion.)
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I dunno... which way causes more drama?)
Dogstar was smiling, his eyes filled with hunger for others pain. "You don't know true pain!" He lashed out again.
Dogstar is now a Sociopath. ) -
I don't really see Wolfpaw overreacting, so what if she kept it secret? That way when she does find out it'll be dramatic.)
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Maybe Wolfpaw could suspect something and get frustrated that Ravenpaw doesn't say something and she'll be all like "Ravenpaw y u no tell meh" and Ravenpaw could be like "I hav nothing to tell yu."
Of course in better spelling but you get my point XD I think it'd cause drama...) -
Yeah! Gud idear!)
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S_E_ NovicePebblepaw yowled in pain, then fell. "Eaglepaw..." She grimiced.
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Pebble, are your characters ever going to do anything besides get hurt? Not once have I seen them actually make an attempt to fight back and not be the damsel in distress.)
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S_E_ NoviceSorry, it was Rave's idea for a soiciopath to attack Pebblepaw.)
Pebblepaw lifted her paw and scratched Dogstar's leg. -
Then make her fight back, obviously.)
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Even if my cat attacks yours, it's your choice for them to fight back.)
Dogstar's gaze had shifted to her companion, who was hunkered down in fear. When she scratched him, the tom jumped back and hissed, surprised. -
S_E_ NoviceMosspaw padded through the camp. She found herself next to Floodheart. "Have you seen Pebblepaw and Eaglepaw?" She asked.
Pebblepaw reached for Dogstar's ears, but hesitated, because he was a clan leader. -
Dogstar stepped back, out of her reach. "So you still don't know your place!" He leapt for her, eyes narrowed.
Floodheart shook his head. "No." He looked back to Owlsong, and asked, "Have you seen them, Owlsong?~" -
Owlsong shook her head. "No, I haven't. Sorry."
Cherrystep grinned excitedly. Bonetail watched silently, looking disinterested.
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