Cavernclan
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Thread Topic: Cavernclan
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OMG *unsmacks you* yeah. DO YOU SEE WHAT IS HAPPENING HERE? YOU'RE ON I'M ON NOW GET RPING BRO!!!!! ;3)
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Finchbreeze: I wake up the next morning and see Badgerclaw. "Want to go hunt?" I ask.
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(Go to deviantart and look for AshiWolf9 that's me!)
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(And i already gotta go 3: i'm sorry i wanted to welcome you again. Bye!)
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i have to go now, too. I REALLY need to take a shower I was up to 1:00 am yesterday and I really need to wake myself up, and I really gotta shave ^^ ok bye. You draw real good, too!)
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guys I typed a story It's kinda like CavernClan stuff sorry I stole the cats. Is it good?
Prologue:
Mapleclaw hissed as a light gray tom slammed into her. She scrambled to her paws, and then raked her claws down his face.
The tom hissed back, then yowled. His red slits for eyes grew wider. You dare attack me? Im a Dark Forest cat! He dodged another swipe from Mapleclaw, who was really mad.
Listen, Hawk, I dont care at this point. Just get out of my life! She hissed. She swiped at Hawk with a paw, but he dodged it.
Hawk laughed, eyes glinting red.
Mapleclaw had black fur with a dark cream-colored stripe running from her forehead to the tip of her nose.
Hawk kept on delivering swipes to her ears. At the last second, he took hold of her muzzle in his jaws, and then slammed her down.
Mapleclaw screeched in pain. Hawks teeth were digging in deeper into her muzzle, drawing more and more blood. She kicked him off, giving her enough time recover.
Hawk hissed, Once in the dark forest, always in the dark forest, dream or not! He lunged at the soft most vulnerable spot on her belly to deliver the killing blow.
Mapleclaw dodged it, and then used her back claws to kick him in the face before running off.
Hawk screeched, clawing at her left eye. With each swipe, he yelled, ThisIsForKillingMyBrother! He swiped at her muzzle where his teeth had sunken in the most.
Mapleclaw had killed his brother in the dark forest in a dream. Right now, this was just a dream. She blacked out from blood loss in the middle of a battle between her Clan and another. Hawk was from WindClan.
Hawk used to be a kittypet, so he kept his name.
With each swipe, Mapleclaw was growing weaker, and weaker, and weaker.
She woke up.
Mapleclaw was in the medicine den. The medicine cat, leader, and deputy were staring down at her, shocked.
Nettlestar, the leader of ThunderClan, hissed in shock, Scratches just kept on appearing on your pelt, a-and a slash mark went across your left eye, and then blood kept on staining your claws every time you swipe! Also, you have a large slash across your belly! What happened?
Mapleclaw sat up and closed her eyes. The dark forest is rising, my friend. The dark forest is rising
Nettlestar put a paw over her mouth. Again? She whispered, eyes wide as saucers.
Mapleclaw blacked out. She died.
CHAPTER ONE:
Riverkit yelped as Ivykit fastened his teeth into his ear. Ouch! He hissed then swiped at him.
Ivykit smashed into his brother, Littlekit.
Littlekit was a small tabby tom. Riverkit was black, and Ivykit was a gray tabby. They all had green eyes.
Their mother was Nettlestar, the leader of ThunderClan at the time.
Nettlestar was a mixture of all three of their pelts. She was light brown with a white chest, belly, and tail-tip. She had black paws, black rings around her tail, black ears, black tabby stripes, and two black dots right above her eyes. She had silver and white stripes on her hips and shoulders. She had a cream-colored patch on her back, and bright blue eyes.
Her mates name was Oakstripe. Oakstripe was a dark brown tabby tom with large paws and sharp claws.
Riverkit complained, Mama! Ivykit ripped my ear! Nettlestar glanced at the deputy, amused. He didnt rip it. Now go inside the nursery and play, ok? She asked.
Ravenmoon, the black and white deputy, lightly cuffed all three kits. Yes, please, he huffed with laughter.
Riverkit didnt understand why they were so amused. He sat down inside the nursery, licking his black paws.
Ivykit swiped his tongue over his jaws, purring. He was looking outside at an apprentice.
It was Sunpaw. She was a light ginger she-cat with eyes the color of sand. She is pretty beautiful. But not as beautiful as Fernpaw
The moon rose up in the air. Nettlestar wasnt back from the nursery. Since they were five moons old, Riverkit decided to go grab them some prey.
He padded across of the clearing, and to the fresh-kill pile. There were only mice left. Shrugging, he took three, then pranced back to the nursery, laying them down in front of their paws.
Ivykit twitched his nose. Mmm, he mumbled, taking in the scent.
Littlekit prodded it with a paw. Im not hungry, he said quietly.
Ivykit looked at him. Why not? He asked, taking a bite of Littlekits mouse.
Littlekit looked at the mouses ear. Look at its ears, he suggested.
Riverkit looked at its ears. Theyre all chewed up! I wonder what got it before one of the patrol cats killed it, he meowed, twitching his black tail.
Ivykit leaped to his paws. Lets go ask the medicine cat. Softcloud will know what to do! He meowed, puffing out his chest.
Littlekit grabbed the mouse in his jaws, then ran into the medicine den. Softcloud, we have something to show you, he said. He nudged the mouse over to Softcloud.
Softcloud gasped. Nettlestar! Come quick!
CHAPTER 2:
Windpaw ran across camp, following Nettlestar. Let me in! Im her apprentice! I need to see! He kept on telling the two cats, but they were in deep discussion, looking at the mouse.
Littlekit, Ivykit, and Riverkit werent helping at all. They kept on squeezing in between his legs, or jumping over him to get a closer look.
Windpaw was so mad, his brown tabby fur was ruffled. He flattened his ears, then hissed, Please, just let me see it!
The two cats stopped, and the three kits backed out of the medicine den.
Softcloud flattened her ears at him in apology. Yes, Nettlestar, Windpaw should see. He has a closer connection to StarClan, even more than Leafpool, when Firestar was still leader!
Windpaws ears went back up again, and then he went over to the mouse with the chewed ears.
He licked the mouses ears, then pressed his ear to its chest. He heard a voice
Visit me in your dreamyou will soon find out The voice said.
Windpaw jumped back, neck fur bristling. I need to visit StarClan in my dreams, Softcloud, He meowed impatiently, looking up at the moon.
Softcloud looked taken back, and she and Nettlestar exchanged glances. Um, okay then, Windpaw. Well leave you be, she meowed quietly. They backed out of the den.
Windpaw looked over the edge of the medicine den, and down the cliff. They were picking their way down the rocks. The three kits were running around the warriors den.
Windpaw liked his ThunderClan home. It reminded him of Bramblestar, the other ThunderClan leader many moons ago. Bramblestar visited him in his dreams very often.
Windpaw went back inside the den, and lay down on his nest of ferns and moss. He listened to the water drip down onto the stone ground. Before he knew it, he was asleep.
Windpaw found himself inside a dark, eerie forest with dead trees and bushes. The ground underneath him was soft and slimy.
Windpaw shuddered, looking down at his paws. He heard a distant shriek of pain, and an occasional growl somewhere nearby.
A twig cracked. Spinning around Windpaw saw a tom that looked exactly like Bramblestar. Maybe it is Bramblestar, but something about this cat gives me the creeps!
Windpaw looked up at the cat, then studied his paws. Suddenly, he felt a paw swat his ear. He found himself now battling a small she-cat inside another part of the forest.
The she-cat was black with a cream colored streak down her muzzle. He kept on swatting her and biting her, but he couldnt stop.
A voice in his head kept on telling him to go on and on. Windpaw suddenly recognized the cat! It was Mapleclaw, the most skilled fighter in all of ThunderClan.
Windpaw felt blood under his claws, and a strange sensation washed over him. There was a shriek, and then he found himself in front of the tom that he thought was Bramblestar inside the mysterious forest.
The tom stepped forward. I am Tigerstar! He bellowed. He unsheathed his claws, then raked them down Windpaws cheek.
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it won;t let me put all of it, but just tell me how it is so far!
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why does my account say that im a newbie and i have a profile pic? 0.0
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(That's a pretty good story!)
"More ceremonies to do..." Nettlestar meowed.
(Uh oh, Blizzardkit's worst nightmare is coming true! Finchbreeze will be a warrior when he's an apprentice.) -
(Awesome! But Softcloud retired :3 and i'm back for a little bit)
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This is my story I just stole the cats!!! :) )
Finchbreeze: After hunting, I go to nettlestar.
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(Lol okay. And i think it'd be funny too XD)
Badgerclaw trotted over to Finchbreeze and meowed: "One last thing, i'm looking forward to sleeping with you in the warriors den." -
Finchbreeze: "Aw," I meowed quietly, licking his nose. He's so sweet!
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GTG sorry sorry sorry whatever i gtg take my new poll, too!)
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(YES! I been trying to think of ways to make Blizzardkit's life the worst way it could be! Really!)
Blizzardkit trudged out of the nursery. His wounds were feeling better, but his heart wasn't. He feared that Storm was right, and she'd kill Ivykit.
Nettlestar waved Finchbreeze over.
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