Dragon's Lair
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Thread Topic: Dragon's Lair
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Also, you might want to add some features if possible, like, She saw a burly man attacking a slim girl. If features aren’t included/CSs aren’t, then that isn’t needed
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Well, there's no CS for the "burly man," he's just a side character.
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True true
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But since he's a side character you can add as many details as you want to him.
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Wait, could we just copy and paste one o f Vio’s responses and kind of fix it?
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Myra walked down the street. She heard yelling whats that she thought then decided to follow the noise to see what was going on. She turned into the alley way that was closest to the noise to see a man attacking a girl. She decided to help out the girl. She quickly grabbed the mans arm "Get off her!" She said a little out of breath.
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Off-topic, but how do you do italics?
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That one sentence is bothering me. Here's how I would do it:
She heard yelling closeby. What's that? she thought, then decided to follow the sound to see who was in need of help. -
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I forgot to re-read it. My bad I would've fixed it too
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Hy, what are you doing?
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Myra strolled along the crosswalk. Suddenly, yelling caught her attention/she heard yelling close by.
That’s how I would do the first part. -
hello
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^Yeah
We're helping Vio improve on her roleplay responses.
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Late post lol
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