Dragon's Lair
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Thread Topic: Dragon's Lair
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I’ll give you some feedback
So, after the , or “comma”, the letter should still be lowercase.
Also, grammar: If the word after you're about to say “a” starts with a vowel, change the “a” to “an”
Like so: A owl hooted.
It should be “an owl hooted” because “a, e, i, o, and u” are vowels, and “owl” starts with an “o”. -
^^ But otherwise it's pretty great!
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We need details! What was her reaction when she heard it? In what manner did she get there? Did she stroll, run, or hop?
Also, you need to fix your punctuation. -
wait
has anyone ever used a semicolon in the history of the stage role plays?
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I have
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Im going to work on punctuation (was never my strong suit)
I find it hard to put in supporting reactions sometimes i think its cause i rush to answer the roleplah -
Don't rush. Take your time to make a good response.
Try it again. -
Whoa
I hardly use semicolons because whenever I’m doing something seperate from writing a story I just forget it's there on my keyboard -
Myra heard yelling what was that? she thought. She decided to investigate where the sound was coming from, she walked to the alley way where the yelling became louder. She saw a man attacking a girl, she grabbed the mans arm "get of her" she said.
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Use capitalization at the beginning of each sentence. Also, remember the difference between a comma and a period.
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It did get better but I agree with Dragon.
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the punctuation's going to my problem. Its been like that most of my life. Im probably going to have to try harder to do better on that
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If you need to, look over your responses to make sure everything is grammatically correct. And remember to add as much detail as possible.
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Will do
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Ok, try one last time and then I think we'll move on to a different response.
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