My OFFICIAL thread

Thread Topic: My OFFICIAL thread

• Ali30 Newbie

  9 years ago
  Thats really good
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  Wendee30 Novice

  9 years ago
  thanks for the encouragmemt, but it sucks. I am going to fail if I turn it in.
• Ali30 Newbie

  9 years ago
  Trust me its good
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  Wendee30 Novice

  9 years ago
  Okay, how might I fix that last stanza though?
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  batman12506 Novice

  9 years ago
  Trying using metaphors.
  I don't know like this I guess:
  
  
  As I run to my hope
  To be finally free
  To be finally who I can be
  Sand moving out of my way
  That old place
  Seems so far away
  But not
  far enough
  Memories in the past
  Are finally gone
  Freedom
  A place I can be finally sane
  
  Not the best.
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  alex3000 Experienced

  9 years ago
  .-. the Library
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  therealminime Junior

  9 years ago
  ^
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  Wendee30 Novice

  9 years ago
  Yeah, that is what I a supposed to be doing, but it sick because it is so conflicting! Messina says it has to use metaphors, but it also has to contain direct information. I have to find a balance.
  
  Thanks.
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  therealminime Junior

  9 years ago
  I posted back alex. :/
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  batman12506 Novice

  9 years ago
  Sorry.
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  alex3000 Experienced

  9 years ago
  so did I
  
  tis okay
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  Wendee30 Novice

  9 years ago
  It's okay, you are a great poet, my teacher just sucks.
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  Cheese4M3 Junior

  9 years ago
  Hey, guys, can you join this roleplay? Thanks.
  
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  batman12506 Novice

  9 years ago
  Thanks, I never thought I was. But Okay.
  
  Okay. I still haven't went back inside.
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  Wendee30 Novice

  9 years ago
  You should, let
  I doubt they would still be mad

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