Let's teach you some science theory examples
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Thread Topic: Let's teach you some science theory examples
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I mean the superhero "Catwoman" ewe.
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No. I'm saying you horribly over simplified things to make them sound silly. Not to mention it shows a very gross misunderstanding of evolution and biology.
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It's supposed to be over simplified. The song isn't meant to BE REALISTIC. It's meant to be STUPID. I guess that's how it'll be considered to you, but really, it's supposed to just be stupid-funny.
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Eh, if it's meant to be "silly" Then don't advocate it with the idea of actual learning.
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Bob, Ugh. Stop with all this crap, It's just a song. It's not some nuclear bomb she's holding. Some songs that are silly and fun are a good way of learning, CAuse learning is meant to have fun and do hard work!
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I understand your concern for how I'm displaying the "theory of our beginning" and how I'm making it "silly", but some people may not have known that some ideas were that we were this or that. I may not have fully displayed the true meaning of learning in this, but hey, you're learning about my ways, are you not?
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AnimePhan, stop letting your ignorance show. The only person blowing things out of proportion is you. We're not fighting. It actually is possible to disagree without making an ass of yourself. So please stop proving your inability to understand that.
Dark, I can see where you're getting at. But even under that theory, you're committing an injustice. If you're trying to show people that there are other theories out there, then over simplifying them in a song meant to make them sound silly is a very wrong way to go about it.
Also, you only mentioned two theories there. Creationism and evolution. -
I was thinking about only a few. If you'd like to help me not over simplify them, maybe you'd like to point out some of the things that are wrong with it. I'd like to gain as much information that I can to perfect this so everyone can enjoy it. Wrong or not.
Those were two I was really trying to focus on, actually. -
(I'm a story writer not a poet so if I screw something up or use the wrong terminology please correct me)
I noticed that you dedicated only the first verse to creationism. Discussing how humans were formed from the earth and all. I haven't subscribed to religion in forever so I can't help you very much there.
The entire rest of the song was focused on different stages of evolution. Unless you're wanting the song to be primarily sciency, I would suggest trying to find a way to elaborate creationism. (Or maybe even contrasting the two of them?) -
(I'll try. Not too experienced myself to be honest)
Yes, that was the intention. That's fine. One of the main stories was that Adam was the first person besides God, then came Eve. So they were the "first two people" on Earth.
Oh wow. That's something I didn't think about. Primarily sciency wasn't exactly the way I wanted it to go, but that might be a good way to follow. (That could work too. Just could take longer.) -
Bob, all it was a humorous little ditty. She's not writing a fanfiction of the origins of the species.
Aliens /actually/ stole my underpants. (omg liek thats simplifying alien human interactions sooo much).
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