I don't know if anyone will see this but
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Thread Topic: I don't know if anyone will see this but
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GinnyGirl JuniorCould you read this and tell me what you think?
"Hurry up, Ollie!" I said, turning my head so my hair flicked around (you know in that really cool way) I'm on a world tour, and right now, I'm at the Pyramids of Giza. Actually my parents let me go alone, except I had to take my little brother, Oliver. He was a small 7 year old boy with brown/blonde hair, blue eyes, tanned skin and a habit for crying if someone so much as touched him when he didn't want them to. A mean like Jeez! Dude what's up with that? Anyway my name is [insert name]. I have black hair with a green streak, I'm 13 ( wahoo), I have green eyes, tanned skin and I spend my time basically living life to the limit! :D. Anyways, where was I? Ah yes. I was running to a pyramid my brother struggling to catch up and whining " ..... I don't want to walk anymore! It's too hot." " Well duh it's hot! We're in Egypt remember Einstein? " "But.. but.. - " " But nothing! If your complaining, get your BUT back to the Bus and keep it there" Gosh! Little brothers are so difficult! Oh look! It's the tour guide! FINALLY! What's his name? Oh yeah! " Excuse me! Are you Perry? " you ask, hoping you don't sound stupid like last time you were going to talk to a guy... *flashback* You are walking down the corridor on your first day of high school. There's this guy... He has blonde hair, smiling green eyes, dimples and a super sweet smile. You walked over to him and were about to say hi when - *flashback finished* My arm hurt. Great. My brother has to slap me again. And in front of this guide who I was trying to make a good impression on. You stand there taking "Perry" in. He had VERY tanned skin, tall, brown eyes, sandy hair. Looked ok. No like one of the loners at high school, not one of the stuck up jocks. I like him. -
GinnyGirl JuniorNo one?
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GinnyGirl JuniorBump
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I like it!
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GinnyGirl JuniorThanks Rissa. :) I wrote I little bit more if you want to read it.
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amazingly awesome!
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If you've got more I wanna read more Ginny!
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This is nice! Keep it up! ;)
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GinnyGirl Junior(rest of paragraph 1)
"Yes, I am. Are you ____ and Oliver?" he replied awkwardly. " Uh-huh." "Then follow me." and he started leading us towards the pyramids. I turned around and grabbed Oliver's hand and started pulling him along. He burst out crying. As usual. " Let go of me!" " Do you wanna go in or not?" "B-but..." he started but realized that there was no point in arguing so he gave in. He walked sadly along beside me looking back every now and then.
It took about 15 minutes to get to the pyramids. When we finally got there Perry told us to wait where we were and he went off. My brother immediately started yelling. "I wanna go in NOW! I wanna see a mummy and I want to see the dead people's skeletons and... and.." "Shut up for once in your life." I replied calmly. Ok. When we stop at England, I'm gonna get a leash for this kid. Oh, and a roll of tape to make sure his mouth stays closed. I squinted off into the distance, trying to see Perry. My brother stopped screaming, thankfully, and sat down. I don't really know what he was doing, and frankly, I couldn't of cared less. As I looked for Perry I tried think of what to get my friends back at home. I'd already gotten Natalie, my brunette BFF, a blue bracelet that matches her eyes from Mexico. And Shantae, the wonderful white haired girl (her hair is actually pure white), a silver locket from Brazil that had sapphires on it, which glittered like her sea blue eyes. I still needed to get Paris, Dionne, Li, Jayna, Jasmine and Karlishia something. -
Good job! :D
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Woah, the description for Shantae is EXACTLY what I look like. O.o
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GinnyGirl JuniorO.o Creepy...
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VERY.
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