Write your short stories here.
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Thread Topic: Write your short stories here.
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always fighting, arguing over us, over money, over lots of things, then, when they split up, our dad decided to take custody of us, but he actually just dumped us at an orphanage, they were really horrible to us there, they always beat us up and gave us horrible food, and the sheets were always cold and rough, so one day we managed to run away, and then one day, Nancy came and told us that she was a friend of our mother and she was having tea with her, and our
Mother wanted to see us because she knew we were always near her house, so when we came, she locked us up here, we screamed and shrieked and yelled and cried for help, for countless days, nobody ever came, but now…" and her voice trailed off.
"Alright, I found a rusty old saw in the dumpster where I stay by, I'll get it, and hopefully I can get the bars off quickly, and you guys come out, then I have some business with her…"
"And what might that be?" Daisy asked.
"I can't say now" Nathan said with a smile, "But you'll see soon enough"
He went back down the alley ways and ran down the hard pavements, he looked at the city clock that was put as a monument on the round about, 20 minutes had passed, that was good, he got to the dumpster and rummaged through the rubbish and dirty piles of crap, with all the banana peels and empty cans and thrown out good stuff that people didn't want Like clothes or old toys, or stationary, and finally he found the orange box with tools, there was a hammer, some nails, screws, wrenches, ah, finally, the small saw, it was a little bit rusty at the ends but it didn't matter.
He rushed back to the house, he ran at top speed, when he finally got there, he tapped on the bars, the four looked up at him with hopeful eyes and a glint of strong, warm happiness, there were four bars, Nathan wanted to see how long it would take to get the first one off.
He started sawing and sawing and sawing, for a long time, and as he got about halfways through, he managed to push the bar and it came off, but the bottom part was still attached, he sawed on it a bit, and the pulled it, it came off difficultly but took less time.
Then… after one hour, it was twenty past one, the bars had come off.
They all rushed up, each one wanting to get out first.
"Hey! Hey! Hey!" Nathan cried, "Stop it!"
He put his hands in front of them.
"Ladies first, let Daisy and Cindy, they can climb on you two's backs"
So Billy and Willie crouched down on all fours, Daisy went first, she stepped on Billy's back and climbed on to the window, turned round and held on, but let herself drop.
She smelt the cool air of freedom, she felt like she hadn't smelt something so fresh in years…
Then came Cindy…
Billie next…
And it took sometime to get Willie out, because he didn't have a back to get on to, but finally they were out, they rushed quickly and hugged Nathan, saying multiple thank-you's in one go.
"It's OK! It's fine! Your welcome!"
Then, he took them to the alley where he stayed, and told them to wait for him, he rushed and ran back to the house, not saying a word.
He saw Nancy through the window, cooking up some macaroni and cheese, he knocked on the door, then ran to the back of the house, making loud foot steps and coughed so she could hear, she followed the sounds, and Nathan advanced in to the kitchen, stuffed his sack full of food… bread cheese, macaroni and cheese, fruits, apples and pineapples, chocolate cake! And bottles of fresh milk.
Then he ran as he heard Nancy coming back, but he ran from the back of the house, so she was in the kitchen, confused at what happened.
He waited some time; he heard outrageous screaming and yelling from Nancy, he ran out, but he was stealthy and knew better, she didn't see him because he advanced when her back was turned rummaging through the cupboards and bread box, he ran, and ran, and kept running, when he reached them with a whole bag of fresh, yummy food, they were delighted.
"How could we ever thank you?" Cindy asked him delightedly.
"Be there when I need you" said Nathan.
"You deserve so much more than that" said Willie.
"Shut up and eat" Nathan replied with a smile.
They all laughed, and ate all the different foods that were there, and giggled and talked and thanked Nathan for the hundredth time, and the five sat together there, the happiest five in the town that night, while a horrible, mean woman was shrieking with terror and anger, on that long October night, under a shining, gleaming full moon.
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My stories tend to be very long, I hardly call them short stories anymore, I don't know why I bother posting it here when no one wants to read it.
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That was an amazing story. It would make a good movie, actually.
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Yusei Fudo Noviceawesome!!!
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i dont have the skill to write a story and i have a really hard time discribing things so ill just summarize
Ok so theres this girl and im 5th grade theres a new kid and they dont really kno eachother so they're just freinds that u occasionaly say hi too,and im the 6th grade they totaly hate eachother for no reason and they both get in trouble trying to get bak at eachother,till in 7th grade they realize that they were stupid for hating eachother becuase they make great friends and near the end of the school year the girl and boy make a wish on the danidileon and they ask eachother wat their wishes were,and after half an hour of trying to figure you eachothers wishes they boy asks if they could say every other word of there wish and it went like this....
tyler:Will
me:you
boy:go
girl:out
boy:with
girl:me
and it turned out they both had the same wishes and they're happy togerher.
this is me and Tyler's story =) -
WOW THAT WAS A REALLY GREAT STORY ILM I LUV HOW THE MAIN CHARECTER HAS MY NAME!
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Thanks everyone! I really appreciate that you read it!
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THE UGLY BARNICOL
Once there was an ugly barnicol. He was soooo ugly,evreyone died. -
Listen, I don't want to hear this sh1tty stories, if you've got a proper one you took some time on and has a subject, put it here, if you've got no use, then f--- off, I really don't want you.
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It was the only short story I had at the time. The thread is called "Write your short stories here." and that was a short story. And I didn't make it,I heard it from a whole bunch of other people. I don't know who made it,I don't care who make the story. Don't freaking blame me.
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Now Im really pissed off.
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since i dont have the skill to write a story i just wrote a summary =)
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It's not that hard.
I'm just sick of idiots writing a stupid scentance, don't have a proper story, then f--- off. -
i just have a hard time discribing things,ill try to make it a short story but it'll take me a while
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Im horrible at writing stuff. That was the only thing I had.
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