My poems.
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Thread Topic: My poems.
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eilloh NewbieI walked among the holly trees,With silver bark,and dark green leaves.
Joyous laugher broke the night,like tinkling bells in the starry light.
I held a rose,a bright red rose,as I watched the golden river flow.With moonlight shining on my face I danced and waltzed with fleeting grace.
My dark hair tumbled down my back,it's tresses of the darkest black.
As lovely as it all may seem,alas I awoke,it was a dream. -
hey eilloh you had better check the comments on your psychic quiz...
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Wow, that was amazing! I liked the second line best. =)
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That was great,Eilloh.
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eilloh NewbieI sat on the dew covered ground,and sighed.
Suddendly I heard a strange cry.
Our greatest foe is approaching!Said the topaz leaves of orange and red.
A chilling breeze came feom the north,in response to what the leaves said.
I watched in greif and fear,as the wind slowly came ever so near.
I watched as by the thousands,the leaves fell to the ground.
They were cold,unmoving,they did not utter a sound.
The trees that once were bronze and brass,turned into shimering glass.
Monthes passed by the wind ceased.The leaves picked themselves up,and climbed back up the towering trees. -
That was AMAZING! Wow, you're really good. Better than me by far.
My favorite part of that poem was, 'The trees tha once were bronze and brass turned in to shimmering glass' that line was nice. =) -
Ah, typo, 'That'
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eilloh NewbieThank you,I have read your story on Blood,Sweat,and Fears.I enjoyed it.
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Uh, I didn't write that. Angel of Death did.
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