A Brand New Poem!
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Thread Topic: A Brand New Poem!
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My apologies, this poem is currently untitled:
Your substance is at loss;
Your eyes are smeared with deceit,
Your mind is hollow,
Your body, covered in your sown,
Your heart is darkened,
You had been caught,
Wrapped in ivy and thorn;
Your thorns had cut us,
Your ivy poisoned us;
Yet, for you to see its blood among you,
Feel their sting
How I longed for you
To bleed,
To cry,
To plead,
To drown your justice,
And burn your dignity
When will you be graced in purity?
See the Almighty light?
Revive the delicate feeling
Of your wailing heart?
Your soul is shattered,
Your purity polluted,
Your faith faded,
You sins unspeakable,
You are smothered in the Devil's garments,
Set them alight,
Let them burn;
Burn away your darkness
And your sins,
Let you fall to your knees,
Overwhelmed with grace,
As your final ashes surround you -
*applauds* I like it!
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it has an unsettling, uneasy, disturbing, tone to it. I love it!
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