Read and critique.
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Thread Topic: Read and critique.
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even my story is better than yours 2kan
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*facepalm* Do you not see the title? I want people to critique this so I can improve my writing, so if you're not going to be useful, don't say anything.
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Next, you're just copying a thing that a bunch of people do, it's stupid and annoying, and you should just stop, it's obvious you just want attention.
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One day there was a terrorist attack in Canada, and the terrorist was a Muslim girl who believed that Allah had told her to commit acts of terrorism. The following day, she went to Russia so she could get Vladimir Putin to agree with her plan to nuke Iceland because she hated anti Muslim white people.Â
One year later there was an earthquake in Malaysia and one minute later there was a tsunami in Estonia and the world had officially fallen into disaster. Five seconds later there was a school shooting in Latvia, and then everyone in Japan died because of a nuclear holocaust. The next day, most of the people in India and China were deported to Antarctica, and that solved the overpopulation problem. Kim Jong un then decided to nuke his own country and South Korea as well. Three days later, the Muslim terrorist girl decided to nuke Russia because Vladimir Putin didn't agree to her plan, but this backfired and the Muslim terrorist girl was taken back to Saudi Arabia to be killed by Taliban soldiers.
The next day all of the countries in the world were nuked except for Finland.
one hundred 💯 out of one hundred 💯 for me ➡👩 on creating such a wonderful 👼🎆 story -
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I'd tell you to leave, but I know you wouldn't listen.
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have a f---ing seizure
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I don't have epilepsy, but if I did, that would be very dangerous, maybe even murder.
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I'm sorry but that first meme omg
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