My love story so far!
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Ugghhh," groaned Saara, waiting for Jack. It was her last few weeks at junior school, and she wanted to make the most of it, by spending lesson time with her crush. Getting fed up of waiting, she ran across the playground, and headed for Jack's classroom. Forgetting that her brother was in the same class, she ducked down and peered at the whiteboard, expecting to say that Jack was absent, but taken by surprise, he surprisingly was in school, but not in the classroom. She tiptoed to the girls toilets, and messaged Thomas, her ex, to meet her outside the school.
"What do I do? Jack isn't coming. This could be my very last chance to see him." Sobbing lightly on the outside, but distraught on the inside, she made a run for it - to Jack's class. Saara knew this would get her into trouble, but it was the only thing she could think of. Bursting into the boys toilet, she knocked on every door, calling his name. Thomas was behind her, thinking that was the 'not very sensible' idea. "Jack, it's me, Saara. Come out, please?".
Shedding her tears, she sent Thomas back to year six, to get her friends.
" Saara, what's wrong?"asked Rhea. "It's not....no. It is isn't it?"
Bursting into tears, Thomas hugged her, with warmth, love and sadness flowing through her. -
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My Love Story
By Saara
"Ugghhh," groaned Saara, waiting for Jack. It was her last few weeks at junior school, and she wanted to make the most of it, by spending lesson time with her crush. Getting fed up of waiting, she ran across the playground, and headed for Jack's classroom. Forgetting that her brother was in the same class, she ducked down and peered at the whiteboard, expecting to say that Jack was absent, but taken by surprise, he surprisingly was in school, but not in the classroom. She tiptoed to the girls toilets, and messaged Thomas, her ex, to meet her outside the school.
"What do I do? Jack isn't coming. This could be my very last chance to see him." Sobbing lightly on the outside, but distraught on the inside, she made a run for it - to Jack's class. Saara knew this would get her into trouble, but it was the only thing she could think of. Bursting into the boys toilet, she knocked on every door, calling his name. Thomas was behind her, thinking that was the 'not very sensible' idea. "Jack, it's me, Saara. Come out, please?".
Shedding her tears, she sent Thomas back to year six, to get her friends.
" Saara, what's wrong?"asked Rhea. "It's not....no. It is isn't it?"
Bursting into tears, Thomas hugged her, with warmth, love and sadness flowing through her.
Amaan, staring in shock, whispered to Varsha, "Does he still like her?"
They all heard footsteps. Each one of them ran into the girls toilets, but Saara locking the door in the cubicle. "It's him..." The message passed round from one another.
Jack heard them talking. "Hello?"
"Jack?" His dad was behind him.
Saara stepped out of the cubicle.
"He is just there, you know," Amrit said.
"I can't, I'm sorry" she replied.
Her brother Adam saw her running.
"Oh no... I don't think he should have seen this....." clarified Rhea.
"Saara. Wait!" Thomas and Jack called.
"Jack? Where were you all this time? Do you know how upset she was?" Thomas said while sprinting, trying to get Saara.
"I didn't know!"
This was getting out of hand. Amaan, Amrit, Rhea and Varsha decided to go after too.
"She told you last weekend!" Replied Varsha "How could you have forgotten?"
"Forget this, I'm going on ahead. She is mine."
Jack's dad stood at the corner of the corridor, watching the children figure out a love story."Adam! You looking for your sister?"
Adam replied with a worried "Yes".
"Follow me, I will take you to them."
When they had caught up, Adam tried to break up the argument.
"It's not happening! You won't have her! She will be mine!"shouted Thomas.
Meanwhile, Saara, Rhea and Amrit stood puzzled.
"All of you, stop it! You are acting like babies! Just split up, and leave each other alone.
Later that day, Saara got a text message from Thomas, telling her to go outside. She went outside.
"I need to tell you.....well....that i...you know..still like you...." He said.
He leaned in, but she ran off...
To be continued.... -
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