My Wiritng Journal
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Thread Topic: My Wiritng Journal
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Give me a sec, I need to find my REAL writing journal.
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Okay, here it goes. It's realy choppy, and I plan to fix it in the future, but now isn't the time for that.
I have an idea for a story. It's going to be called "Convinced. That is, if the title isn't already taken. It's based on my life at my school, but with a few small changes. I know it's stupid, but I've figured out what would go on the back cover. Consider this point #1 of the long process of writing. (Up until I edit, I will use the real names, but then I will change them.)
Point #1:
Stuck in a school full of lies and tricks, jelousy and anger, and total drama, Leah is lied to on a daily basis. But when she gets suspicious, she's faced with the challenge of figuring out the truth behind it all. Can she prove it to be fake and turn her life back to normal, or will she make a fool of herself and be stuck with an even bigger mess?
From words to plots, I need corrections. I already see some ways to edit just that paragraph, so I can take it. Be brutal. -
Too cliche.
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Shide: Well, it's the only idea I can come up with. It's a big step for me to have ANYTHING. Maybe after I write it you'll change your mind. At least I'll have something to do. And I meant for that to sound just a little cliche.
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Suure o.o cliche isn't a good thing btw. Pretty unoriginal.
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I know, but right now I have insane writer's block. Maybe I'll come up with something new along the way?
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No more feedback?
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COME ON!
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I agree with Shido. Just like most of your soaps, the idea's been done to death. I can't really comment anymore until you post some actual writing.
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Well..... Whatever. I'lll still write it. My full idea is:
I beleive all of this:
Jacee started the rumor that me and Peyton were dating (Kimberly did)
Kimberly is my BFF (she hates me and wants revenge for earlier years)
Peyton doesn't have a crush on me (he does)
Jacee is only Peyton's friend (she likes him)
Lydia is just a nice girl (she is jelous and wants o do everything better han me)
This only applies in the story... Peyton doesn't really like me. XD -
=I This is extremely overused and just not good. Try another plot
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I can't! I HAVE no other plots! I'm telling you, it's just a little thingy to get my juices flowing.
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Then think, smart one. Think about plots already done, and get an original idea from them.
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See, this is why I can't write. Every thing I come up with just isn't new enough! Maybe I shouldn't write. You know what, don't feel like you did it. it's my fault for asking for feedback and getting all touchy about it. I'm really stupid.
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I agree with the fact you're really stupid immensely.
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