The Book.
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Thread Topic: The Book.
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Welcome to The Book. In here you might find rants, poems, songs, or actual stories. All of these things are created by me unless said other whys. So.. Stick along for the ride and you might just have fun. I'll take all and any feedback unless your rude, if your rude then you can just leave. Let's see how this turns out shall we?
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Smoke a lil'
We escape nothing when the smoke blows from our mouths. Instead we numb ourselves from our pain. Spark it. Breath it. Pass it. In a circle we go with a glazed laugh we know what we've done. It's a plant, it's a drug, who cares anyone? Laugh a little longer until the clouds come down and our brains are once more ours. Just know when we smoke a lil' it's just in great fun. We are young, we are bold, let us live before the nights get old. Now relax and kick it back so we can see what we have. Let's lose faith for a moment because in all we are one. Spark it. Breath it. Pass it. Just smoke a lil' before the night grows old.
This was written due to the fact that my friends where pot heads and I wasn't pleased by it. But I got over it because it's their lives. -
Rotting Bones
My heart is just a stone, cold and heavy in my chest among rotting bones. My eyes are dark with the lies I tell and your just waiting for me to fail. Escape a world that's dark enough to call hell. We're running in circles without a clue or hope to hold onto. I'm trapped in the web I've spun, lost in thought I'll just lay myself down among these rotting bones where I belong! Times escaped us, you've escaped me, I think it's time we stop living these lies and open our eyes to behold the truth. We no longer belong with each other. These rotting bones have done what was needed and now we can rest and be free. My hearts a feather floating in the breeze. Let's be free.
Not sure why I wrote this, but I did. -shrugs- -
Time To Go
Let the whispers of the souls of the forest tell you what they know. For surely, the wise know the old and the dumb know the young? Or is it all a lie? Everyone sees beauty with a different eye. With life, death will follow with hot breath on the back of our necks. With a gentle touch, the winds will let us know when it's our time to go. Like a blooming flower a life will be born with petals made of white. Let me know when it's time to go. I'll follow with little resistance I swear. Hold my pinky out with a shy smile. The clock is ticking like an endless heart. Ours may stop but time will never end. Let me know. When it's time to go. I'll follow I swear.
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Open My Heart
Lay my arms down and bare my throat. Take my life if you feel provoked. Am I a sickness? A disease? Open my heart and let it bleed. Let the dagger slid in between. With little resistance I will bleed. With a cry you will fall to your knees. With the grief and the pain, we feel nothing but the same. With the truth will come the doubt, the tears and the anguish cries we will shout. Death is not just a game. Open my heart and let it bleed. These tears that run down my face will once and for all set me free. Where there is darkness, you will see that the sun is not an enemy. Let's open our hearts and let them bleed. I swear we will be free.
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In The Dark
In the dark, I shall lay. Eyes wide open with a quickening heart rate. These nightmares won't stop re-playing in my head. Waking or sleeping they dance around in my head. Taunting me to the brink of insanity. I don't want to fall. Go ahead and watch me suffer. I won't say a word. I won't utter a cry. In the dark I shall lay. With a heart bleeding out yet I don't cry. I shall suffer alone and I'm okay with that. Don't come to me with your filthy needs. Instead come with a purity to wash away these nightmares that are haunting me. I'll just lay here in the dark. With eyes wide open. Free me from myself.
Last one I made so far >~ -
What story to start..
Gears:
When young Lara gets in a fatal accident that changes her life forever, she learns she's a start of a revelation. But what if she dosent want to be? That all changes when she's forced to baby sit Tommy. Tommy is just a regular town boy, his parents wealthy town folks. But on a raid, Tommy gets caught up and taken. Now he finds himself stuck with Lara. With an enemy hot on their heels what will the unlikely pair do?
Lost Souls: Jason dosent know how he died, he just knows he did. The only things he's remembering is his friends, family, and school. So when he meets new girl, Alana, who can see ghost, he goes to her for help. But what if she dosent want to help? But when the pair get into more then they bargend for.
Fall: Ally is just a normal girl. Oh yeah, and a werewolf. Lead, Protect, and Follow orders. That's how the alpha knows life. But that all changes when a new guy moves to town. Michale. Going against everything she knows, she saves him from a mouton lion. Now they both are in a lot of danger.. So they run. -
I like them all. :D
You could work on watching small homophone mistakes such as 'your' and 'you're'. You have really good description. Other than soaping and rping, I haven't really seen much of your writing, but I really like it. Your style is lovely. -
Thanks and I always get those mixed up! I'm working on it. >~
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If you can replace the word with 'you are', it's 'you're'. If 'you are' doesn't fit, it's 'your'. That always helps me.
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Thanks Lone. I've alway struggled in grammar and spelling >.>
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Screw it, I'll start working on Gears.
Chapter 1. Wake
Lara doesn't remeber much from the accident that happens only a few months ago. She honestly tried, for the Docs sake but nothing was adding up! First, a blur of a few faces that seem to haunt her even though she can't see anything but blurs. Second, a white light that seemed to fill everything, taking away any shadows that dared tried to hide from the blazing glory. And third, darkness. The empty space Lara floated through as she slipped into another place, not here but no there eaither. That's how Doc found her, a blonde hair cowgirl in the dessert with what was left of her jaw. Lara blinked slowly, waking up from her memories. A clicking noise filled the air followed by a soft hiss of water. Lara sat up and looked around, her emerald green eyes sharp and penetrating as she looked at every corner and every object that didn't even move but it didn't matter to her. Even the dead can kill. Trailing a pale hand through her long pale blonde hair as she inspected her room, she was pleased to find it clear at the same time her hand ended at the middle of her back. Her hands slid over the soft white cotton gown that she wore to sleep in almost every night. It was a simple night gown that ended at her knees and the arms stopped at her elbows. Lara felt like she could never stop touching things after recently just getting her sense of touch back. A ghost of a smile flickered across her pale red lips as her hand inched it's way up to her face, starting at her scarred ear her face went from soft human flesh to a warm living metal. Lara's jaw. When the Doc had found her, her jaw was gone except for her teeth, tounge, and lips. She was lucky, well that's what everyone told her. -
Running her fingers lightly over her new jaw, she lightly touched her lips. The metal ran from ear to ear, but stopped at the corner of her lips. Doc had to re-make her lower lip and it felt and looked normal with the artificial flesh. Slowly standing up, a small chip behind her left eye calculated the things around her. No ones awake. She thought as her monitor picked up any life forms near by. Slipping out of her room, the wooden floors cold on her feet, she walked down a dark hall way. Three doors on each side and she looked at the one directly in front of her. Sighing quietly she continued her way hanging a left and entering the main room or the living room. It was too dark to pick out the furniture but she already knew everything that was there. The big, long red couch sitting infront of the fireplace yet under the bay window. Then there's the tan, flower spotted arm chair across from it with a dark wooden table next to it the held a candle. Lara curled her toes slightly as if feeling the soft brown rug under foot that wasn't to far away and covered most of the living room floor. Shrugging slightly Lara continued her way through the house heading towards her favorite spot. The stables and the garden.
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I like it.
omg her name is LaraPost more soon. ^-^ -
As soon as Lara opened the wooden door, the cold night air wrapped around her body with the scents of the out doors. It was a cool summer night. One of those nights when the stars are in full shine and everything moves with a slow and calm pace. Turning her pale face to the full moon Lara smiled before shutting the door behind her and walking down a stone path bare footed. The rocks dug into the soft flesh of her toes and soles but she continued on. Soon the sound of a babbling brook and the smell of horses filled the air. Smiling, she sped up and entered a well used dark wooden barn. Grass turned into sand and hay along the floors as she walked past six pens, all filled with horses before getting to the last one in the back. Looking inside she sighed happily at the sight of the wild horse. Not too long ago, they had found a herd of wild mustangs and the story was, no one could get one. That is until Lara proved them wrong. The huge, muscular stallion stepped closer an then perke up when he noticed it was her. Lara smiled and ran her fingers through his pitch black silky mane. Then her hand slid across his bronze pelt, almost metallic golden colored. Finally her hand rested on his four head where a white splash that looked like a paint splatter was. "Hey Axel." She cooed to the untamed horse. He gentle blew at her from his nose in greeting. No one else could touch the horse but her. She gentle leaned her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes in defeat. It seemed like the only ones who saw her as normal were the animals. Everyone else wanted her as a weapon.. She thought bitterly.
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