A poem thread for me, Br0wnieBunny.
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Thread Topic: A poem thread for me, Br0wnieBunny.
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Uhuh. So dude, I'd like the truth, but in nicer terms. Friendly criticism.
Bumping the thread, Lucky.
Thank you, Sim. -
Oh, okay. I'll keep the whole "nice terms" thing in mind. X3 I didn't really feel like there was much effort put into the Halloween one, but the Katy Perry one is neat. I like the idea. The cat one has some great lines too.
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That criticism part was directed to I-something-something letters, not you.
The Halloween one wasn't that creative, I know. Sorry. xD I didn't feel good that day. But yeah, thanks! -
You used part of soft kitty from the Big Bang theory!!! I love you forever!!! (As a sister, of course)
Soft kitty, warm kitty, little ball of fur,
Happy kitty sleepy kitty, pur pur pur~
Love this song Nya~ -
I knew it!!! XD I was reading that and I was like "that sounds familiar..." I don't watch that show but I knew it!!
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IHLAOY NewbieIHLAOY, god dammit!
It's an anagram, it stands for HILOYA!
What's not to understand! It's simple!
And screw you, at this moment those poems could be read by anyone on earth with access to a computer. Just let that sink in for a moment. Really think about it. Anyone, from a guy in Egypt to someone in the middle of Scotland, can read that. The queen, the prince, all of their servants, numerous famous artists, anyone, at this moment, has the potential to read those poems. For the love of god, make them worth reading.
Have I gotten through to you how important quality is? This isn't some notepad you keep under your bed, this is the internet. Anyone, can read, what you write.
So I'm not going to beat around the bush and say 'oh, it's rather good but you have all the rhyme of my pet cat rolling over a keyboard.' I'm going to tell you, plain and simply, what you did wrong; and you did do wrong; so that you know what to avoid in the future.
Can I just ask a question; have you even ever READ a poem? Because sometimes the easiest step to starting is plagiarism. -
Yes, I've read a poem before. And why does it matter? I can choose how I would like to write my poems, and you can't judge because I'm doing nothing to hurt anybody.
Good day. -
Dang, didn't use this in a while. Might as well.
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Ihlaoy, you can't sit on your high horse with your big words and criticize everyone because you're apparently so much better than them, because that's all you do.
brag, criticize, brag some more, criticize, repeat cycle. -
Thank you, Wolfie..
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Prostoy russkiy poet,
oy kak ya znayu yego.
zapis' slov na bumage v techeniye vsego dnya
zhal', chto ya imel vremya, chtoby skazat'
chto literaturnykh dannykh privedet put'
v moikh snakh sbyvayutsya.
(Translation:
Simple Russian poet,
oh how I do know it.
Writing words on paper all day,
I wish I had the time to say
literature will lead the way
to my dreams coming true.) -
Wallowed alone in thoughts,
while my feelings here have brought
me to an exhausting drought,
oh how I feel sadness...alot.
I wish I was pretty,
I wish I was nice,
I wish I was made of sugar and spice,
I wish I was made so perfectly,
but god has chosen another, you see.
Why can't it be me, why can't it be me?
It seems you don't see my life clearly.
I'm not pretty,
I'm not nice,
I'm not made of sugar and spice.
Instead it's hate,
yes hate,
I'm made of hate.
Hate.
But I guess it was decided fate.
I hate it. -
I wish I was pretty,
I wish I was nice,
I wish I was made of sugar and spice,
I wish I was made so perfectly,
but god has chosen another, you see.
Why can't it be me, why can't it be me?
It seems you don't see my life clearly. -
That's...nice.
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Bump.
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