Watch me write these poems..
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My lungs burn for air,
Drowned by my tears.
This really isn't fair,
Facing all my fears.
And the worst one
Looks me in the eye.
Just when I think I've won,
It takes me down, why do I try?
The fear of losing you,
It grabs me by the neck.
If all goes well, soon
I'll be resting in this heck.
I feel really ill.
My head hurts bad.
I have the urge to kill
Whoever made you mad.
But I did it.
I did it.
.........
I've done it, my nightmare's come true!
I'm in full-fledged tears, let me apologize to you. -
I'm about to hit you.
Stop being a b----.
All you do is bring us down.
You act like a witch.
5, 4, 3, 2.
Now I end with FUK YOU. -
I'm starting to wonder if I need proffessional help....
Yes I do. -
Okay, I'm bored.
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Why are you so mean to me?
Sometimes, I just want to cry.
Other times, you fail to see
Life through anothers eye.
Am I so imperfect that you
Hate me this very much?
I sometimes wonder if I've
Completely lost my touch.
You make me feel so empty,
And yet you make me whole.
You're the missing puzzle piece
That leaves a gaping hole. -
You're an incredible poet! The words you choose are beautiful and emotional. You're truly talented and should be proud of yourself, for your skills are amazing. :)
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Aww thank you! That really made my day!! ^^ Depression be gone!!
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I wish I said I love you.
It's too late now, you're dead.
I barely mumbled a goodnight
As you tucked me into bed.
If I'd known you would leave,
I would've told you all the things.
I would've done everything you wanted.
I'd write a song for you and sing.
All you asked for me to do
Was to sing you a simple song.
But I guess I'll see you soon enough.
I'm sure it won't be too long. -
You're welcome :)
That last part of the poem made me cry! Only the best writers have the skill to do that.
Have you thought of entering a competition? You could win!
Best of luck :D -
It's for my grandmother, who passed right before the end of the school year.
You think so? c: -
All of them or just the last?
And I do think so...I wouldn't have posted if I hadn't thuought they were incredible.
You're poems are just as good as many professional poems I've read, if not better.
Also, I'm sorry for your loss :/ I'll be praying for both of you :) -
Just the last. I was depressed.
Oh stop. XP Thank you very much. c: I'm very pleased to hear that, especially 'cos I'm just 12-13. XD And thank you, she was a great woman. c: -
She really was.I'm sorry, gramma. I'll be there in a second.
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I SWEAR TO GOD, FAITH YOU BETTER SIT YOUR ADS HERE RIGHT NOW. OKAY, I DIDN'T MEAN IT!
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I never did succeed in my dreams.
You thought they were stupid, anyways.
But now I've opened my eyes, it seems.
I have the power to number my days.
Although it may seem just a bit morbid,
I cannot help but break down in laughter,
For the only reason I stayed in a life so horrid
Is to recieve the one thing I was after.
But I find nobody can give it to me,
No, not here on Planet Earth,
But somewhere in a midnight sea.
Why'd my mom even give birth? -
Stahp.
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