Poems
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Thread Topic: Poems
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Your world is crashing
as my hads slowly press
hard againts you throat
as if everyone of you
lest breathes were liquid
and they're slowly dripping
out of you body -
Somehow i feel like
im internaly dying
suffering on the inside
but look perfectly fine
on the outside
somehow i feel like
the whole world
is useless and
have no use living
but you change that
you make me feel
the will to live
the will to move on
to not give up
but if on day your gone
it all comes to an end
and my whole world
will shatter and blow
in a million peices. -
Soon very soon
i will be freed
from this hell
soon very soon
i will not have to
handle the world
and the people
on it
soon very soon -
Very nice poems, Saphire. You should try getting them published, I told you how.
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I agree with ILM. Those are very good poems.
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*Groan* I wish I could write poems like that, but they end up like a load of f---ing s---, I mean it.
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emowolf13 NewbieThose are very good poems Saphire. And ILM I think you can do anything you set your mind to.
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Fine, go read my poems and tell them if they're that good.
Go read my short stories and see if they're some Shakespear.
Go on then, and see just how wrong you are. -
I think everyone has nice poems on here.
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ILM you wishu could write poetry like me but i wish i could write music like you =)
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Aww, thanks Saphi! You just made me smile!
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DarthVader Newbiethose are really good poems, Saphire, but they're really sad :( good job, though.
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Agian Sapphire,nice poems.
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its just i was depressed at the time when i wrote them
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This is more of a song but it can also be taken as a poem about how I feel honestly right now. Enjoy ^-^
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