How is this for the start of a story?
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Thread Topic: How is this for the start of a story?
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Those times of lonlieness and vulnerability are the ones that kill us all. Nowadays you cant be weak. You cant be scared. You have to be strong and confident, or youre nothing. When life brings you down, if you don't get up right away, or land on your feet, youre considered raw meat. I mean, who wants the loser that has no confidence in anything they do right? people want the sportsy type. The type that can lift two hundred pounds, and run a mile in under seven minutes. So what do the people like me get? Rejection... Until now.
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Sounds interesting... I like it :)
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:) thank you
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Chapter One:
The air was cold. Stepping onto the front steps of Annaway high for the first time in months felt like stepping onto my death bed. It was now or never. I walked to the front door and pushed it open. The crowd of nobody's and wannabes were in the corners as the populars filled the center of the room. Me? I wasn't a popular, or a nobody wannabe, I was my own person. Sure I was teased and made fun of, but I was myself. -
Please continue :) sorry i was so late. I thought you would post it in quiz form :P
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Haha, do you think I should?
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The rules of the school were strict, even more so if you weren't a popular. You could only wear plain colored pants or plaid skirts, and a white, red, blue, or green plain short. There were no logos or patterns on jackets unless it was school approved or a dress down day, which we had every other Friday thanks to the class President, Macey Lincoln.
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I like it, do it.
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:) Thanks
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I think it's pretty good :). Just make it longer :P.
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:) Thanks DOA
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Not many people outside of the populars wore red. I was an acception. I didn't care what people thought, I will wear what I would like. Many people wore green, and blue; few in white. The populars wore white and red; blues scattered among the crowd.
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Sorry!!! But in that sentence, it would be spelled exception. And I like it too!!
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As I move through the crowd, my eyes lock with a popular. A boy with the bluest eyes I'd ever seen. His face is soft, and delicate. He's perfect. His beautiful white smile looks straight past me. I turn to see a beautiful blonde haired girl. She is smiling as well, and moving towards him. The smile on my face that had snuck up on me, faded as quickly as it had come.
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I was being idiotic to think that someone as beautiful as him would be looking at someone such as myself the way he had looked at the girl. I turned with a sudden tear in my eye. Why was I getting so worked up over this? That was the first time I had even seen the boy, I've never even talked to him yet. His eyes were so adoring. I cannot help but to wonder if a boy has ever looked at me in such a way.
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