The Love Letter

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Thread Topic: The Love Letter

• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  @wolf_heart Thanks!
  
  PASS THIS STORY ON IF YOU LIKE THIS!
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  Want some cake?
  
  
• Damask Novice

  11 years ago
  Ummmm I think it could use a little work, but you've got the right idea :-) Then gain, I've written a full book, so I can be kinda criticizing......
• Damask Novice

  11 years ago
  Oops I meant again. Eek!
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  Thanks Damask!
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  Good or bad?
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  ange Experienced

  11 years ago
  That was beautiful :) You made me cry!
  
  Just one tiny tip: Proof read....just something small but it will improve the flow :)
  
  You have potential :)
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  @ange Thanks so much for your advice :D
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  What do you think? Read the letter in the first page...
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  sillyme Novice

  11 years ago
  I like it was beautiful.....
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  wolf_heart Novice

  11 years ago
  ^ikr. So silly me, you seem cool. How are you? I'm silly too! :)
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  wolf_heart Novice

  11 years ago
  Just go to the lounge

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