4Rose
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Thread Topic: 4Rose
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So the main character is a kid living an everyday life.
A week ago a new girl appeared at his school. She wears a hat and a scarf even inside the building, and has a tendency to fall asleep during class. He thinks she's cute, however, with her pink hair and sparkling sunny yellow eyes.
And then the day comes when his teacher tries to kill him.
The teacher plunges a knife in the main character(Gen's) hand, and the new girl Rose snaps awake, yanking a dagger out of her skirt and slicing the man's head off.
At first he was relieved, then he saw the murderous look on her face as she stared at him.
Luckily, a man in a suit with a bright pink rose walks in, restraining her. He says his name is Byakanna, and that Gen needs to come with them.
Far, Montblanc, and Thisbe are the three main leaders in the underground military, under the Master, aka a demon much stronger than any other.
They fight the resistence, who created Rose(Rose is a homunculus with a habit of killing anything in site)
Far and Rose's relationship is similiar to that of Roy and Edwards, as in the two take any chance they can to bicker and make fun of the other.
Far is Rose's adopted father, however.
Byakanna has the rare Chimera talent of being able to charm any female in sight. He's part snake. He's obviously gay, though, but he denies it every chance that it arrises.
So yeah...just felt like sharing the awesomeness.^-^ -
All that is good but...might I offer a suggestion?
"Luckily, a man in a suit with a bright pink rose walks in, restraining her."
That part is a little random. So he just randomly walks in? Kind of unrealistic.. -
No...that's not what I mean.>.>
Byakanna, the man, he'd been inside the school the whole time, I just didn't give that info in my short description....o.o
I was just giving a small description..not our whole plot. -
Hmm, makes more sense.
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We're way past this part.xD
We've been working on it since last year.:P -
Sounds interesting xD lemme know when you guys have something out
I'd love to read it. -
Thanks.:D
And I will.
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