Don't leave me hanging part 31 | Comments

Oh and as for that question, who inspired you? I honestly don't know. Aw well, tonight was rant-tastic but I'm going to turn down my anger. The verdict is, on an emotional level I hated this, but on a critqueing level this was very thought provoking. Granted everyone has their opinions but some people might actually sympathize with Blake because of this, it was handled very well. The only reason I picked apart his goodbye was because I hate him. If someone else said maaaaayybe I would've liked it. This all has to do with my hate for Blake the quiz was fine. I'm just going to say TEAM JUSTIN ALL THE WAY and Peace out

Okay first of all (BTW this is the Blake's goodbye rant) This isn't goodbye, I mean it's going to be goodbye to your french kisses and that I'm actually happy for SO LONG SUCKER I HOPE LIFE DROWNS YOU IN LEMON JUICE!!! Second, there may be a hole in that black heart of yours, but it's not my fault that you're drunk and thinking through your man parts right now. GOOD BYE. Oh and this next part is too rich, "don't hold what I do against me too harshly" Blake *shakes head* I'm afraid it's FAR too late for that. Even if it wasn't, I'd still hold the things you do harshly. If you kill, steal, or god knows what else don't expect me to forgive you. If you do something terrible, my thoughts are going against you full throttle. So don't even give me a freaking warning because you've crossed that line already. Okay, so you're saying you're too weak to stop yourself from doing terrible things... you have no conscience. If I didn't like Blake before he told me this, I definitely wouldn't like him now. "I'm a psycho who can't control my actions, hope you still love me" ~ Blake. Okay I don't trust Blake at all, he shattered his trust himself so boo hoo for him.

Okay hold the phone *holds cell phone* that's actually a good idea. I mean get Jack and Blake under a diplomatic supervision and work out something... at least it would be a good idea if Jack wasn't an idiot and Blake wasn't so indecisive. JUUUUUUSSST SAYING. Actually I'd rather burn his house down then move into it *lightbulb* *writes down* I'm a genius! Oh right the necklace, almost forgot *shoves it down Blake's throat* there... that's all accounted for. Okay I'm just going to shove my anger under the rug and say this... yes I understand where Blake is coming from, yes he's just another guy with problems, and yes he's a little deep at times. HOWEVER *pulls anger back up from under rug* HE IS AN UNCONTROLABLE MENTAL CASE WHO NEEDS TO BE LOCKED UP!!! This guy... oh my god I could go on about Blake. Yes, I liked him once! That was before he showed his true colours, I'm not falling for this puppy dog act of his again and I'm never giving him another chance. If that's his lemon then I hope he chokes on it and passes out because he's NOT worthy of a second chance. I'm glad he knows that there's no hope in chasing after me. I pray for the next chick he falls in love with, may god help her when she gets kidnaped and kissed by him.

I thought this part was incredibly funny, especially so when Blake wouldn't understand that I was, in fact, a twin. Really, I truly am. We look so much alike my mom get us confuzzled sometimes. What's even funnier is that my twin's middle name is Maria, so it's one big coincidence. Because if Blake really knew so much about me, he'd know I was a twin, and then he'd have been so totally confused, too. Just saying.

I loved it!!! Th overall feelings that I had fit perfectly together and it was such a different side of Blake. I still like Cory though. I don't know who it is yet but I will guess later on for the contest. Like you did with @Firey_Soul you were on of the ones that inspired me to get an account and start my series Love Complications. And I've expanded from there. I've never properly thanked you for that and the fact that you read my series and commented and stayed with them. So... Thanks so much! :')

*reads first paragraph* ... this is gonna be focused on Blake huh? *grabs chainsaw* I've been looking forward to this >:) *back to actual story* AWW NO I'm wearing his necklace? dude if I don't make it out alive I'm going to come back from the dead and shove that necklace down his throat!!! Who do I think you are? *grabs thesaurus* now let's see... scumbag is far too good for you... jerk is too general... oh I've got it! You're a animalistic, venomous, malicious psychopath who needs to burn in a volcano!!! AND THAT'S BEING GENEROUS!!!! now go away before I chuck you out of the window. Hmm, am I feeling confused about my feelings- NOPE he's the one who got himself drunk NOT ME... although his words are a little chilling to say the least. Blake asks far too many questions, many of which I can answer in rants but he's not worth the effort for this one. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA Blake... do you really think I'm falling for Jack? He's the worst at making plans!!! I'm sorry but I like smart guys. I like the guy and all but... man is he an idiot! As for Kris, well he earned two points but he's being held back because of the stunt he pulled because he had to get all dramatic and fling himself out of a window HELLO DRAMA QUEEN (I know I'm being hard on them but seriously, Blake is kind of stupid if he thinks I like them that way. They're nice guys and good characters but these are just the reasons they're very low on the score board). ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! I DIDN'T KICK HIM IN THE GROIN? What the hell is he going to do he's drunk he won't remember!!!

I was so psyched that you finally got part 31 out! Amazing as always, but I feel like crap for doing that to Blake. :( He has to make everything so difficult. I hope there's Kris in the next part, or Cory. Or both. Both would be awesome. ;D And... um, I have no idea who inspired you to make this epic series but I owe them a 'thanks'! I'm gonna skip the contest. I'm sure the story will turn out awesome no matter where the characters go. :)

Oh my god he called me Cinderella *grabs chainsaw* this is going to get messy *moment later* AND THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR CALLING ME THE SISSIEST PRINCESS EVER!!! I'M PRISSY NOT SISSY!!! You know if I actually did go with Blake and join him, I'd probably silently kill everyone in that place and then we'd win the war. Yup, I'll come with you... just let me pack *grabs assorted weaponry* I'M JUST BEING CAUTIOUS... hope you have a goodnight's sleep >:) Oh I'm sorry I need to quote this because it needs to be read in able to get the following rant "Best and worst good-bye ever, ________. Patching up the hole you just carved in my heart is going to take time. And please, what I do or what you think I do, don't hold it against me too harshly. Actions already in motion stay in motion unless acted upon by an equal or stronger force, and I don't have that force in me to oppose it. I'm in too deep already," Blake says, "Just know that I tried, princess."

Alright I feel bad for Blake, but that whole thing was a distraction. I think that hes up to know good, and I do think I could have stayed longer to distract him, although he didn't need distracting so its good I left. I feel bad for him but that's life sometimes. Now I feel like a horrible person. I'm going think some more before I guess but I've got a guess. And looks like my twin didn't get the time to save my butt memo. As always lovely quiz, next one better be up sooner.

~XD

@xxblutixx My other comment disappeared >:

That's why it's a little hard to understand that. I wrote before only @xxdarkxx's name, and not what series she wrote. I also said much more than that, but I'm a bit of emotionally unstable right now(and also REALLY tired), so I won't bother to write everything again now. Maybe I'll do it later.

I was SO happy when I saw this out! You really cheered me up, I've been so stressed about my classes next year, and the state testing I have to take...*sigh* but then I saw this and *happy dance* You're such an amazing writer! I'm so going to guess which writer inspired you, but I'm going to post it on a later comment so I can research ;)

Btw, I don't know if you know this, but when I first joined gotoquiz, I do believe your series was the first story quiz series I ever read. I fell in love with it right away. I still think you're one of the best writers ever! :) You are actually one of the people that inspired me to create Paranormal Love. :)

WE WILL NEVER BE ON GOOD TERMS YOU WHINY SMUG FACED ABOMINATION!!! ooooh so I'm close enough to slit his throat huh? *pulls out dagger* I know it seems bad, but trust me it's for the fate of the world as we know it. O.o Can I just barf for a second, question 22 is... disgusting (although great detail, but since it's with the character I hate most in this series I have to automatically hate it I'm sorry) THERE IS NO "US" IT'S JUST YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CARE ABOUT YOU AGAIN!!! YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE, SO SHUT UP >:( Uh yeah I don't feel guilty about that kiss. Nope, not at all. Guilt, isn't the word. I was thinking more along the lines of disgusting, horrifying, and PISSED ME OFF *shoots Blake*

Oh wow, midnight... guess the plan didn't work out time for you to die Blake, we can't have loose ends *shoots Blake* How many times have I killed him now? aw well, far too little *shoots again* meh still not enough... anyways let's keep reading. Okay what to pick, either go along with the stupidest plan I've ever heard of, continue to stay in the same room with the person I hate the most, or freak out... um I'll pick grab a lightsaber and stab Blake with it, put on some shades and slice through the crowd, steal that necklace and teleport back to base. In short, the Jedi way. Oh hey that's a good question WHY DIDN'T I STAY IN THE BALLROOM WITH KRIS??? I mean he's nowhere on my list but at least he's classier than this walking pile of horse vomit (a.k.a Blake) and WHY AM I STILL IN THIS ROOM!! I'LL BREAK DOWN THE DOOR IF I HAVE TO *grabs Blake and bashes his head against the door* I'M FINALLY FREE!

f---. I already commented again, but it also disappeared >:(

I'm not eager to write everything again, so I'll just say something new.

You know that drawing I was making, with the characters of your story? It's going forward, I've made a huge progress those past hours. Kris was an angel, but Jack was a b!tch. Specially his hair.

Sorry for cursing a lot now, but I'm really frustrated(because of Jack and his stupid hair) >.>

@xxblutixx In that case you'd have to make him lose his right eye too. BUT, I'd probably be in the angry mob if you did so(As to his hair, even being as frustrating as it is)(Jack: I'm sorry for being frustrating, then >.>)

Hm, as far as it is right now, I'd say Kris is the best looking one. I guess that all of my skills went to him(I drawed him first), so Jack and the rest weren't so well-done. I think I'll work more on that. Sigh.

@xxblutixx Ok, then... You don't mind it's manga-ish, do you? Go to DeviantArt.com, click on the search box and write: xxblutixx (I chose it as tag because it's your characters). I hope it'll come up :> Yes, on DeviantART my username IS DarknessOnMyEyes. I chose it because it's the name of a song 8)