Your life at Hogwarts | Comments

Sorry I posted this comment late but my internet stuffed up last time I tried to take this.

It was an okay start. I don't want to give a lot of criticism and I actually don't have a lot but I do have a question. Why did you start it in first year? From my experience the more captivating stories are started in year 3 cause you can get better material. It will be interesting to see it played out differently though. But one thing I was concerned about was the fast forwarding. You seemed to rush it a lot. If you don't fast forward that much it gives feeling of suspense and you can fit in more scenes which really captivate the readers. I'd still love to read the next one though so I'll be looking.

Thanks everyone. So aifiahK3mE ill try harder about that. And. Im not sure when next will be out. I just do it randomly at midnight. Thanks natuhlegayle, I'm younger than anyone in HP first year so I dint know much about love. I'm trying my best and I hope you all enjoy. And if you dint like Gryffindor well I'm sorry. I'm just trying to keep it in one direction. No offends.

I don't mean to be rude or anything, but just because YOU don't like Draco, doesn't mean that you can make all the bad things happen ONLY between him and Selena(and also nogood things at all with him either). I mean, I think you should think about what your fans want, before what you want. I know, I know, it's YOUR story, but if you want many fans, you should keep it fair for everyone. Draco-lovers, Harry-lovers, Neville-lovers, Fred-lovers and George-lovers :/

thanks for your thoughts BLueBird, I really do like the criticism all though thats kind've a mean word for it. I call it advice. I'll work harder about fast forwarding a bit. Part. 2 will be fast forwarded a bit though because the first 2 weeks aren't very exciting so..... but if you read the ending paragraph you would've seen what the next one beginning was about.

Also AiFahK3mE no offends but if you read the stories (not saying you never read them or anything) but you will fins that Draco highly dislikes anything to do with muggle-borns and I'm just trying to make it realistic. I'm working 'Your Life at Hogwarts pt.2as I am typing this. Tomorrow it SHOULD be open to the public but unfortunately I suck at deadlines....UGH.

Very good for a first time! I bet if you use more proper english and put things like this example: Neville heald you tight. As a question and this EXAMPLE: 1: Neville is cute. 2:I like pudding then you wouldnt have to worry about making parts for different answers

Good start~!

Kind of hard to admit, it's hard doing a love story when you're in your first year in Hogwarts. Not much can actually happen to be honest but I'm interested in how all of this will turn out! I love the different style with the results and the writing style so far! Keep it up! x

Just remembered. Natuhleegayle, its not exactly that much of a love story. It goes through year 1 to year 7 and what happens. Also thanks. These are my favorite quizzed and I wanted to make it different frlm all the others I'fe read.

That wasn't actually that bad! I'm pleased, most of the spelling was right (I get kinda annoyed when it isn't, but htat's just my general weirdness). WELL DONE!

I cant find the time between schoolwork and housework. I'm a freaking maid in my home! But I can try at night if you really want me to.

Its gonna be done tomorrow and will be done by late tomorrow unfortunately

I loved it! It was amazing and deserves a ten! Glad I didn't sit with Malfoy! When's the next part coming out?

I'm sorry everyone. I will not be making pt. 2. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

Very nice start. I enjoyed it and will be looking for the next! x

Me too.

Part 2 is out!!!!!

Whaaaaat? Why not?