Unfortunate Story. | Comments
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Ooooh, very risky not having romance. That's actually quite brave, I've never seen anyone do that before on GTQ. There's a first for everything I guess, all it means is you're going to have to have a really solid story and gratifying characters. However if you've written it ahead of time I believe you're in a good place. I'm not into anime, but I pictured all the characters anime once you described the school uniform. That's so weird though, why do anime people just have these collar thingys on their shirts all the time? Oh well, not my speciality. It was very neat grammar wise, that'll get you some fans. People like reading neat things, not sloppy all over the place writing. You're in a good place for this story, keep up the good work. Oh and I also agree with Aria make it a bit longer, just so people have more to remember later on.
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@Aria, Thank youu~ Yeah, next time I'll add more questions, I wanted to but it's getting late so I didn't want to stop in the middle so I kinda cut it short. I like that the names are in japanese so that they are more orginal, I guess. I tried hard not to mess up on my grammer ( aside from the notice and begining ) I think I misspelled 'decided' a fewtimes, though.. and, again, Thanks :>
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Good quiz. I like it a lot, just add more questions. The originality of the names are good and there was no grammatical errors. Keep up the great work x
Aria1 -
OMG.
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I think it's pretty good.
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read it.
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