True Love ~part 1~ | Comments
Below are comments submitted by GoToQuiz.com users for the quiz True Love ~part 1~.
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I agree with ViolaLover. Just work a little bit more on some gramar and it will be more understandable. Also kinda explain things a little bit more. Like give some background history on characters or add more detail. Other then that its a great story!
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Well, it was an okay start. First of all, you do need quotation marks (") when someone speaks, otherwise it's to confusing. You also need to add some more detail, and if you're going to comment on something, put it in (). It will make it a lot better for other people to read. Also, watch your punctuation marks. Don't put an ! mark if it's not an exclamation. I can't wait for your next one!
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i agree with both _ViolaLover_ and wolfygirl, it was ok, just that you need to make it go with your plot and story (i hope that makes sense), it shouldnt be rushed, and it needs detail, more explanations, and longer paragraphs, but i do want part2
angelic41 -
Ok I understand all of you guys I hope part two will be much better and I was using my iPod to write everything so it's way harder thnx though
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Sorry but Im not making part 2 anymore it's canceled sry for everyone that wanted part 2
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I agree with _ViolaLover_ as well but I do like it :) can't wait for part 2
sundaisy1 -
I made this quiz plz take it and rate and comment if not many people take this quiz there won't be part 2 0r 3
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Not bad, but it kind of confused me. Maybe it would help to add these thingys ---> " and a bit more detail would be nice.
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