The Unforgiven and Unforgotten part 24 | Comments

First of all, you just had to reinclude the scene with Jayden? D,; second of all, Nex is one crazy, psychotic, twisted, delusional b****, and That's even more fitting for her seeing as she's a HellHound. Poor Delgado. Such a good action scene, Comet, and yes I choose the option about there has to be something wrong coming up. Interesting twist, and I can't wait for part 25

Awesome part! I doubt I'll die, Nex will die first!!! I still cant believe what you did with Jayden. I don't care about loyalty. Jayden is still mine and we will be together! Drake will have to get over it. Next part ASAP. I think I will discover my new power in the parts ahead :D

AHHHH!!!! I WANT JAYDEN BACK!!!! Uugghh, I already miss him already :( BRING HIM BACK!!!! I am going to fricken' kill Nex!! One of my dogs almost gave me a heartattack from barking and growling and howling at a part of my fence, nothing was there so it was okay. It got my adrenaline going though, as if it wasn't already because I killed a spider by flinging a hairtie at it. It was pretty cool :P oh sorry, got sidetracked. Well, anywho, awesome part :) can't wait for the next and I DEMAND JAYDEN BACK!!!! and for me killing Nex.... But mostly Jayden. XD

I can't wait for the next part! Sorry I don't comment on these. I should but usually when I find them I don't have the time. But I do now. So I will be wait for the next part

Hi, I would just like to say that I admire your writing, and I love this series cc:

Wait, wait, wait did I just die! Oh god! Oh and for the record Nex is a total psyco no question needed!

So good! Please make part 25 soon!

^_^ ohhhhh brother!!!!!!! I had a lonnnng COMENT but then it got deleted!!! Ok let me start over... *clears throat* first of all i did NOT see that coming!! Luna... Nex... Whoa...I should say I hate you right now but I love you cause I'm here in Florida ... Got back from the beach and now read this part in the relaxing night air..... If the main character gets off for a sec and gets the ankle bracelet and lives I would so totally ... Ok never mind that I meant slap this iPod and yell in frustration.... Or if she dies I'm going to kill you >:(!!! Oh thank god I'm going to spend up this night with my awesome apartment instead having the weird dej ja vu stuff and gotoquiz drama stuff... -_- my dad just farted.... And then me :3 WHAT!!!! We both actentaly drank a lot of mango juice and salt water! You cannot blame us!! Ok I must good nIght / what ever... Bye!! :) peace out comet..... Ok I got it down between blonde hair or auburn hair for my series.... Of course I'm not writing it down yet... So I'm going to to imagine as best as I can so when I get back home I could write.... I'm blabbing my mouth the 5th time today!! :/ whoa.... Ok jut asking what should I do... Maybe ..... Ok never mind anything about that... Just don't go of putting TOO much drama in this series ... So if I'm at the pool or beach and take a break ... Dry up and take a break to see the quizzes and I read an intense one of these again.. I WILL throw it in the water... And I'm serious

Loved it but Nex is crazy.

nice part but what happened to shane.. and where are the others.. if shane knew i wasnt inside then the others must have noticed me gone as well?! why didnt i use the touch of death? i would have enjoyed it on nex.. cant wait to read the next part.. thanx