Teenage Chronicle Part 34 | Comments

Erika is on the top of my list now *dramatic close up* and I think you know which list I'm talking about. As for if I believe Cydonia or not. I'm just going to get through these straight. Erika killed my parents through Cydonia, Patch is a two-faced heartbreaker, and Cydonia wants to help me. Okay I have another question, did Cydonia flirt with Calisto or did Erika flirt with Calisto through Cydonia? If it's the latter WHY? Didn't Erika kill his parents and turn him into a fairy? Did she just do it to piss me off... it worked so I guess so. As one of the few people who isn't in love with Patch (I know right, shocking) I'm sort of leaning towards Cydonia is telling the truth because I've never really had a good vibe with Patch from the start. I'm not saying I thought he was bad, I'm just saying I got bad vibes from him... it's my intuition it works %90 of the time. I dunno Patch for me is that one guy I can't really like THAT way and I don't really know why. Maybe this is why but still if he is trying to decieve "me" (good luck with that buddy), what is he trying to get me to do? He was fighting over me with Jake (another guy I still get mixed vibes about) and he saved my life. Was that just an act? What the hell is he planning to DO with me? I don't have my powers and I don't even know what the Nephillim society IS! Is he just going to break my heart? (no dice pal I'm with Calisto) I'm so confused and I want Cydonia or somebody to answer these questions soon or I may have to flip out!!! Okay calming down for a second, I have some more questions. IF Patch is evil, what am "I" going to do about it? Will I upfront say it or will I do little tests here and there to see if Cydonia is telling the truth? IF Patch is evil how did he get information I was on the cruise ship? Also IF he's evil does he make really good cookies? (okay I had to put that one in c'mon XP) That's all my questions, PEACE OUT!!

:'( Always the heartbreaking moment when you hear something terrifying about the man you love. He's breaking my heart already. Gosh I'm just torturing myself rereading that part again and again. WHY?? Well Patch, NO BABY NOOOOO. I'm feeling down now. But this part was awesome, you actually got me feeling bad for Cydonia. And I dun usually feel bad for a character unless I've heard the full story. Going to read SnowCraux now :) I read one paragraph before I read this. It sound great. Bye :D

Tell me that lady was under a spell from Erika or something, please.You know, so that ____ wouldn't trust him and something bad would happen.If you make Patch evil, you are going to get alot of death threats. So I suggest you don't make him evil. Kay?

I did not expect that.. Well that was a surprise O. O And the crazy thing is, I kinda believe Cyndonia :O Why does Patch have to be bad now? He was one of my favorites! Well, I still like Jack after Patch so.... Please let Cyndonia be wrong. Next part!!

... oh heck no, Cydonia. I'm NOT about to let you sob story me and think you're telling the truth on a leap of faith. Maybe Erika was the one that killed my parents, but you're the one who became a minion. I'm not putting my blind faith into an ex-Erika minion. Nuh-uh. Now Patch... it can't be... hm... let's hope it's a Jake moment :x where there's some kind of misunderstanding o.o oooo new story? Must check that out

I have one big question. Why the heck would I believe her after she KILLED my parents?! I will never trust her. All she will ever get from me is death threats. Anyway please make the next part soon!

Next part please. I wonder if the Patch thing is true, i wonder! I felt like there wasn't much in this part. Could you make it longer? I am only asking because I love your writing and this series.

This series was really great!! I can't wait for the next part!! I was kinda loving patch but I guess I was in a big trouble! Well please write the next part as soon as possible

Yeah right like I'll believe u,cydonia. Anywhooo I love ur series! U and a few other writers on gtq have inspired me to start my own series no joke I already got the first to parts out! Plz plz PLZ take it if u do want to here's a link [no urls] if It dosnt let u click it just copy and past into the thingy mabober at the top of ze page

I LOVE U JOSH bye bye :)

Sorry i just got emotional reading this part.. hehe ..... SnowCraux... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *rubs chins as if there is beard* very interesting, yes very interesting mah friend :)

holy mother of fudge balls, this is all so much to take in. i still dont know if we should trust that little B*$%#.so seriuose by the way good series i just caught up and read the whole thing in the last 2 days its really good.

@Twisted_Roots *pats back* dont worry mah friend *glares at Recklessbam* See wut u did here reckless!!! u made one of sister friend cry!!!

Wat the fridge y u no show urls! Anyway it's called DONT TOUCH MY DOG (part one) and u guessed it almost the same thing for Part 2 but part two

Oh my Fudge! O.o HOLY CRACKERS!!!! ;( Well *sniff sniff* for right now patch is off, and i still have suspicion that his good, but still.. Now i concluded in either Alex, Jake, orrrrrrrrrr r...? don know D: I LUV SOO MUCH!!! Ok Cyndonia, thats good enough for me, welcome to my team :P Just lay off of alex and Jake... all of you. Now... HURRY UP AND GO WRITE THE NEXT ONE YOU @SS OF A PUNK!! GO OR I'LL MAKE YOU.. *puppy dog eyes* ppueeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeseeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee.... for meeeeeeee with aaaaaaa cherry ontop ^_^

eve1241 it wasn't her it was Erika controling her body and

TheRecklessBam make part 35 asan (as soon as now)

YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! !! *jumps up and down on bed* sorry what did u say>? wait what am i saying? wait wutttttt? ok anyways: I CANNOT WAIT *hyper eyes*

Part 35...please...*spea chless*

but... but Patch :c Patch loves me! he wouldnt... no! *sobs*

hurry up and make part 35 asan (as soon as now)