Supernatural Studies part 4 | Comments

NOOO cliffhanger!!! DX I hope you can get part 5 out soon because its time for some action! And explanation, yeah that too XP but whoa, 5/7 days you're at rehearsal? o.O that is a crazy schedule by itself. Gahh, sorry I'm reading this late :P I read up to question 9 the other day and something or another distracted me... probably impending homework doom, that happens a lot. Right now, I have to wonder what Trisha and Miranda are up to... hm. And that random non-student lady. Oh, and still that ever-perplexing book!

QOD: predictable? No, because I don't know what's going to happen. Well I did expect that people would going to be mean once "I" showed that I knew Italian, but that's a completely different type of good expected because it shows reality of psychology and I'm getting off-topic. Anyway, I think you're doing fine right now. Pace = good. Description = good. Grammar = good. Nothing wrong, and, in fact, I like it more than just good :) adding guys? I think yes ;) yeah, one or two sounds like a reasonable amount.

How do you know you're safe? You know, one of your readers could just happen to be one of the best hackers in the world, and could find some way to trace where you were when you posted this, then they could hire a tourturer to tourture you until you finnish writing part 5. Just sayin', it's unlikley, but possible.

Okay, back to reality. I'm guessing that that guy was the person responsible for the 'soon' in her special book thing?

Odd dreams... Odd dreams... I got it! I remeber when you were coming up with titles, xxblutixx noted that in the prologue, you said something about dreams! So the reason she has odd dreams is because she's special! Thank you, thank you, hold your applause.

It is a little bit predictable. Not clichd though, which is good. Predictableness makes he reader think, but clichness is boring and reptitive after a while. Your story is one of the best I've seen on here. Do you think I usually write my comments this long? No. My comments are abnormaly long on your story. So yes, your story is a teeny bit predictable, but it's still awesome!

QOD:Hmmm. I'm content with two guys, and three would be good too. Four I could live with, but I draw the line there. Okay, I've spent way too long writing a comment for this, so I'll stop there. PART 5!

Oh my PANCAKES! O.o oh gosh i think i'm going to faint. Hopefully Hummus got drugged by the old lady and not killed. grrrrr now who grabbed me cause i want to punch their face off. No you must not grab me like that and two, i will not be scared by death. Much less die right now in this point in mah life... wait the main character is experiencing this not me. Never mind. Question of the Day: Should I add another guy of you live?- i don't know, just one more please. or just two. i don't know, but please no more then three, it would be a lot of keeping things in order for me. Or are you one of those people who can deal with doing more than three and is expectactuly have an organized mind like Cometlight or others. I don't know the only ting i want is to read the next part as quickly as i can, not get too confused on which guy i love in the end because that is hard!!, and read all your lovley wonderful , enchanting writing. I Loved it. hehe .... okay now i am really hungry for soup.

@booknerd224 haha, I completely forgot that I said that XD *applauds* thanks for bringing it up and remembering :o

i love your series you should bring out the next part pretty soon