Remember the future part 14 Blown up in your face | Comments

GRRRR EVELYN! Freaking... grr, can she get anymore irritating? NEON? Of course they'd be here -.-' where's Warren? Drunk? Oh my goodness, AND talking to Noah? This has got to be interesting... oh, Noah, Mr. Mysterious, are you? Too bad we couldn't have Noah and Warren bond more, it's strange, but an interesting dynamic. Wow, Carol XD hm, he looks like Warren does he? That's gotta be relevant later because Carol is being shifty! Plus she said "call me maybe" XD That and "What makes you beautiful" stick in my mind wayyy too often. The twins disappeared right before NEON appeared? Shifty much? Okay, maybe I'm just looking for another reason to hate them. Oh my freaking goodness, maybe I'm wrong? o.O or maybe it's a ploy? Or who cares because something just blew up :D Wow, Warren fights well even when drunk? ... whoa, Matrix moment

I'm so sad that I'm a whole month late in reading this! D: I hope part 15 will be out soon, love your writing :3

First! :D

Ha, things got blown up! Nothing can be bad with explosions! XD

But, um, we kind of left the twins behind (oh, what a shame.~)

You need to stop making me giggle. Seriously, my family thinks I'm crazy now- ..... Actually, that's not a bad thing. Never mind.

I have a feeling that Devin drunk would be not good. And kinda funny, but really mostly not good.

As for the song thing:

Warren reminds me of If Only by Fiction Plane, for some reason. I honestly have no idea why, as that song was made for Holes.

Noah I think would be... drat, can't remember its name, but it's a lullaby. (So specific, I know.)

Seth is actually easy; Chasing Cars by... Someone. XP

.... I dunno about Devin yet. So far he's the one most in the "shallow" phase, as far as I can tell. And I don't know that many songs anyway. XD

I don't really have much else to say. (IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!)

The only other thing doesn't have anything to do with this, but I write on fictionpress and was wondering if you'd be willing to check me out there. I want a (mostly) non-biased opinion, because no one will point out anything I've done wrong, which really, really sucks (how else am I going to improve?!) I have a different name there, so if you'd be okay with helping me I'll hide it in a forum or something- I'm kinda shy about it.

I knew when that bullet was shot it would have something to do with powers. CONTROLLING TIME IS AWESOME :D ! I forgot what the guy's powers were though :S .

Yay, the terrible twins are gone! I think it would have been better if we just ran them over though...

Tsk tsk Warren, why'd you get drunk. I guess I'll just have to stay with him for the rest of forever to make sure it doesn't happen again ;)

Oh, and I think question 8 was the reason this didn't post. PART 15!

Thanks so much! *One million hugs*

I'll go make a forum, so just look on my profile for it.

Ha sorry I havent been putting coments. I been busy, but love this. I am brain dead right now,

Yessssss it's out!!!! I thought it would be anouther horrible Wednesday!! One trillion thx and hugs!!!!!! :D