Noitect is Activated Part Two {Aria's) | Comments

Oh my gosh, why didn't I see this sooner? Okay I'm just going to cut to the chase. This was a good part, I like how you keep the mystery going even when I feel like I know the answer, all of a sudden BOOM I apparently don't. Anyways, I like the fact that she's "average" and wanting to be unique. Usually when there's a character who has a double life all they want to be is normal, however Davina is different because she wants to be special. THAT is freaking original. I'm dead serious I haven't seen anything like that and I love it SO much. Also, it might be a bad time to bring up that I got a professional pedicure last night. I'm not a girly girl, but that doesn't mean I don't like being pampered every now and then. It's weird though they had like 60 shades of pink and what colour did I pick? Midnight blue, with silver accents. WAY better than any ol' pink could do. Anyways I understand what Davina was saying when she brought up that girls her age are getting their nails done and such, but I kind of felt like laughing since I just had a pedicure yesterday. Also it was only because I had gift certificate to the place anyways. Oh wait I'm getting off track. Yeah I hate seeing people in pain. I agree fathers can usually be the abusers, but I'm just going to play devil's advocate here and say mothers aren't always angels... sadly. I'm lucky to have BOTH of my parents, I mean I know everyone my age complains about their parents and while I know mine aren't perfect, I don't have anything to complain about with them. Yeah I know they have rules and stuff but that's only so I don't end up like a stuck up brat when I'm older who never achieves anything. I'd hate to be that person. Okay, back on track... who is this guy? A possible love interest? Whoever he is, he's a handsome one. Kind strikes me as the strong and silent type... I likey ;) HEY he's a shapeshifter too... I think. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think normal guys turn into a puff of smoke. (continuing)

Ugh, we have step daddy issues don't we? Well move along, we have a world to save. OH SNAP! same woman he hooked up with and had another kid with? AND she goes to your school AND you don't even know who she is? BLIMEY (I heard that earlier today and wanted to say it) it could be anyone!!! Wait... I think I know who it is. But I won't say anything. Aww, me a best selling author? That's so sweet, thank you for that :) I agree for all those other wonderful authors in the making! I can't wait for the day they announce their work has FINALLY been recognized! Until then, we'll just keep insisting they're going to be awesometastic one day. That necklace is pretty cool, mysterious too... OOOOHHH DREAM SEQUENCE!!! okay, let me work my magic. So the door is closed, which signifys that she's being denied something. It's painted black so it has to do with something evil, and since it's broken she must want to destroy the evil and open a new door for the world. Her feet can't move because it's hard to take the first step in beating the enemy. I'm guessing the spiders are her fears. I don't mean seeing a spider is her fear, I mean the spiders represent her fears. She can't scream because she feels "deserted" and "alone" and "trapped" in a literal sense she can't scream because she feels like her voice is useless in her despair. That's my best guess on the dream, I really love dream sequences :D okay wait, the hoe slept over? AWWKWAAARD. So we're going to the library and we don't know what's in store. We grab our bags from the closet, and head out the door. How do we get there? I DON'T KNOW What are we getting? C'MON LET'S GO! You, and me and the LI-BRA-RY! Come along and see what's new, hurry up and tie your shoes! You, and me and the LI-BRA-RY Hey look there's the fan-tas-y, come along to the LI-BRA-RY! (I just made a song about going to a library! that's almost as impressive as my latest hit "making a sandwich!") OH no... a twist! AND YOU'RE ENDING IT!!!! aww :( PART 3!!!

Yay! First to comment! Ok back to the point of the comment. That was really good :) keep up the great work! I live how you cut it off with one sentence at a really interesting part! Please make part 3 :) please!

'Never trust anything hat can think for itself if you can't see where it keeps it's brain!' - Arther Weasley

'Its our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities' - Albus Dumbledore.

So once again, that was brilliant keep up the series! Thank you!

Sparkles!

Oh! I won? =D no wonder you wanted me to read this earlier... I am so slow :P thank you, Aria =) and thank you also for mentioning my story :3 awwwhhh yesh, GTQ is heart-warming *gets the fuzzies* and Gateau is teaching you words? Oi vey... hehe Silva, that's what I call him =o he's a mommy, should tell him that ;P

This story is deep... lots of information... and a unique style. It's very real as in things that happen to Davina and things that she does are those that happen to a lot of people that we can connect to, yet her life is so radically different from the norm that... hm how to say it. I basically want to say that from all the writing I've read on GTQ, there are some that are more prominent in my mind than others, and this is one of them. That's a good thing :) *wonders* is the girl that Achilles likes Davina? ohhhhh o.o mystery, whoa, weird I have goosebumps now... who is he...?

@Missy Prissy Cat nice color choice ^^ blue and silver of 2 of my (many) favorite colors XD and you always have such good analysis, it's awesome because then it makes me think too :P

This might be late and not to the topic at all but I want to email you. I didn't lose my charger. It ran away okay!!! Ndont blame me, also I have been sick and I am going away soon. singin234@gmail(.)c om, you can email me. Without the ( )

Okay I really loved it. Yes I read iy before but I JUST NEED TO COMMENT. I really loved it and I would say more but I really dont know what to say.

@Aria Awesome! I hope you too become a great writer one day. Youre amazing.

OMGOMOFOMGO YOU SAID MY QUIZ AND MY NAMEEEEEEEEEE!!!! xD As always your quiz/serie was fantastic as always :3 I really cant think of anything to say now so......IF YOU LIKE PIA COLADAS,AND GETTING CAUGHT IN THE RAIN!IF YOUR NOT INTO YOGA,AND YOU HAVE HALF A BRAIN! XD