Mirror Lake part 2 | Comments
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That was just wow. Mostly because of the rainbow monkies and fruit XD It wasn't rushed at all and it was so original :) I think you should add romance to make it more interesting (I like romance ^-^). It was confusing at some parts, like in the dialogue, but I got most of it. Also, pretty please, can you add the character descriptions in the next time because I am SUPER forgetful ^-^'' Can't wait for part 3 :P
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Yay, part 2!The only part where it seemed rushed was the spelling,but that doesn't affect the story much.It had a little too much dialouge at the end,so maybe think about how you can improve that while you're camping?Also, maybe you can bring a journal with you so you can work on the story a bit?Hope you have fun camping!
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I meant myth about the water lily is cool I think.
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ya sorry the thing at the end is something i fond out on line about a much called the water lilly
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sorry it was kinda rushed I hope you still liked it.
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this quiz is weird.......but i love it and read both of them twice in the last two days so call me your biggest fan
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