Is Your Warrior's OC A Mary Sue/Gary Stu? | Comments

It says my character is pretty dull, but you should hear the backstory.

Her name is Ravenheart. As a kit she always played with Fawnkit, but uh-oh, Fawnkit dies of Greencough. When she becomes an apprentice (which is delayed due to the lack of warriors) she has a great mentor. But then she stumbled down a ledge and to everyone, she was dead. But no, she wasn't. She lived the next couple of moons as an outcast because an ancient spirit told her not to return to the Clans, and that spirit turned out to he from the Dark Forest. When Ravenpaw decided to go back, she realized Hawkfeather (her mentor), and Sagestar where missing. Blah blah blah travel travel travel, she found out they were dead. As a warrior, she was killed by a dog.

IS THAT DULL???

"Meh, it's a little dull." Bruh
I spent hours working on my backstory.

Fernblaze went from farm cat to clan cat to loner to Fernstar of PineClan. There is a lot more to that story, but that's basically what happens. One sibling died. Her parents aren't dead, but she had to leave them at the farm. I don't think that a story has to be super tragic to be good. Also, if your story is TOO tragic it is considered a Mary Sue! Sorry I'm hating on the quiz, it was super fun and think you did a good job. Just in a bad mood right now.

It said my character is dull. How is this dull! When SunWhisker was a kitty pet her name was Sun. She wandered into windclan territory and ran into the deputy ColorWhisker. Sun wanted to join Windclan so ColorWhisker took her to Windclan. Sand,DuneStar the leader at first said no but ColorWhisker convinced him To let Sun in. Sun became Sunpaw and of course her mentor was ColorWhisker. She became friends with the medcine apprentice, Bluepaw and Shadowclan apprentice Dimpaw. (By the way

Dimpaw is a tom see where i'm going) there was a second battle with the dark forest and when LostHawk was about to kill

The quiz was ok, but i found it kinda stupid that you could choose between saving the leader, your mate or your kits. And with the second question about the leader and your mate you could choose didnt save them, but with the kits you couldnt. And since my main ocs a medicine cat, most of these questions werent really within her character.

How the hell is my oc full? She isn't like overpower but not boring either. She got abused by two legs and got stabbed in the eye by them so she fled and is now a loner with one eye only.

i really enjoy this quiz its intresting and sometimes it can be a little funny i have some great OC's but sometimes for fun i put in sterotypical mary sure options to see what results i get keep it up!

the quiz is ok, but for somethings, I think there should be more options.