Hogwarts Romance pt 1 | Comments

This was pretty good, and I am definitely looking forward to the feast x) One thing I'd suggest though is that you give descriptions to your characters. They all have awesome names, and you're developing their personalities, but I can't picture them D: Because you're using original characters, description is kinda important, unless you were omitting details about how they look on purpose to make the reader form a picture of them?

That was great! I agree with the previous commenter as well. Descriptions are important with original characters, even if it's just a short sentence about it. Otherwise, I loved it, and I'm looking forward to more!

Impressive! I loved the first part! Yep, the characters need descriptions, as told by the first two commenters! It was pretty good till yet. :P

This is pretty good, but where are the actual Hogwarts characters? Ron, Hermione, and Harry?