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  • I got 10% cliche

    The story has three main characters, four if you count the villain from book one that dies at the end. They are the cinnamon Chosen One, the double-agent and the bitter daughter. Zoticus was the son of a rich commoner and got chosen with the power of Vita or life, Maya works for the Council, the ruler of the land and infiltrated Pajfen, the city of the Infernos (people with hell power) and Nova is the bitter daughter being used as a weapon for her adoptive mother, who was a wielder of the power of death but her powers faded with age. Nova is planning to steal her mother's power and restore it and meld it with her own elemental power so she will become the villain in later books

    Spoopy_Moose
    2

  • 0% Cliche! I have the general storyline but havent started writing it yet. My story (IS PRETTY FREAKING LONG O BE PREPARED READING THIS)is about a girl named Lily who lives in foster homes with her younger sister Laurel and then meets this 25-year-old guy named Miguel who brings her and her sister to a group of people who have powers to protect them from the government and other people who want to kill them and/or experiment on them to try and do things later shown. They fight those people and so on. (Im not going to get in detail for the sake of time.) I thought it would be more cliche because Lily falls in love with the villains kid and her sister is basically Prim until you get further into the story. I mean, a younger sister named after a flower is initially shy and meek but goes through some character development only to get blown up. But then it turns out she didnt actually die and it was just so the villain could take her in and turn her against her sister. I might do a bit more to make her less like Prim but idk for now.

    Hermione5001
    1

  • Only 7% cliche! Yay! My story is about a girl who is invited by a secret spy organization to defeat a international terrorist group. They train for a very long time and then go on an world-wide mission to defeat the terrorist group. It turns out that the leader of both organizations (good AND bad) are magicians and they perform spells to defeat each other. The girls have no training on magic but they pick up some wands from the enemy's storehouse and try their best to do magic (and fail :P) it ends with the terrorist group being defeated except for the leader so it's kind of a cliffhanger...

    NatalieArt124
    1

    • Is the story out rn? It's been seven years, but i'm just asking for an update.

      LivianTOTEMS
      1

  • I got 7%

    It's about two young men called Finn and Kai, who fall in love at the beginning of the story. Finn is an apprenticed alchemist and is able to manipulate plant-life, and Kai is a member of a northern tribe that has a centuries-old ongoing feud with Finn's kingdom. As the story goes on, we find out that the two of them are actually one of the many reincarnations of two lovers over the past two-thousand years, who were cursed for betraying their people to be together. Their souls are doomed to reincarnate forever, each life ending with tragedy. In order to end their suffering, they head out on a quest to track down the surviving magical descendants of the one who placed the curse on them so that they may be freed.

    cinnamonrolluwu
    1

  • I got 17% cliche. Pretty good for my first story, tbh.

    Since everyone eze is talking about their stories, I guesz I'll do the same. My story revolves around a lad who, with his mother and 8 year old brother, escape their hometown attacked by one of the major villians (his father is killed while fighting). The villain's group and their ambition is very well known, but until his father's death, he didn't care for them. He decided that, in his father's honor, he would fight against him by gaining the power to do so and joining up with the bvillain's major enemy in order to protect the rest of his family and other. Story goes on fron there, but I won't say anymore.

    Pasio
    1

    • For a first story, this is great! Can I get an update of your story?

      LivianTOTEMS
      1

  • I got 3% Clich

    It's about an African American woman named Tiana Wilson, who works her behind off with her 3 jobs. She later joins the boxing community, because after all, she can work hard, better than she can actually stick up for herself and get some respect.

    But her private trainer, Michael Jumar, he beautiful and strong. He loves woman, and women love him.

    When all is said and done, Tiana might just lose herself, which is what she was afraid of doing.

    NilaNila
    1

  • my story is about a girl lost in the woods, without remembering anything, and has a tattoo of a vine on her arm. Then she finds a guy in the woods and the guy decides to take her home until her family finds her (she was about 7 years old). She was home schooled for 11 years then headed of to high school. After a couple weeks in high school, she starts falling in love with a vampire and doesn't know he is a vampire, then she finds out that he is a vampire and the the girl is a witch. When she gets angry, worried, or needs help, she starts using powers and the vine on her arm, grows when she uses her powers :)

    kittens
    1

  • Your story is 13% cliche. 13%

    You could be a professional author when you are older, or even right now! Your story is fair and square and very good, bravo bravo and remember to thank me if it becomes a successful story! Hehe!

    Aw thank you, I hope I answered accurately - some of the questions were hard for me lol... I loved some of the funny ones, like, "Are you high class villains evil, wraithlike zombies?" and one of the answers was "YES ARE YOU TELEPATHIC" HAHA! That was hilarious. XD

    DarthVader
    1

  • sweet i got 3% cliche! i'm still working on the full thing but the basics is that it's about a religion centered around a deity called the eye with two major groups: the watchers (highest group, closest to the eye) and the blindfolded collective (people who have been wronged by the eye) (not official name btw, will find a better one soon lol) with the leader of the watchers being the main character, i want to portray religious extremism through the eyes (no pun intended) of the extremist itself so yeah, still trying to figure out an interesting plot since i came up with this idea like 2 days ago

    angler0fish
    1

  • I got 10% cliche

    (haven't written it yet, because I am the queen of procrastination)

    The story is about a neglected and unnoticed princess who tires of being stuck in the shadow of her much more favored and adored older half-sister. A major public embarrassment that I haven't decided on yet causes her to snap and release all of her pent up anger and frustration from the last ten-ish years, and she make a brash and not-very-thought-out decision to run away from home.

    That's all I have so far, really. I have some characters and stuff I'd like to add. Also, she's gay. BYYYYYYEEEEEE.

    cinnamonrolluwu
    1

  • 10% cliche! My story is about just an ordinary guy whose parents gave him a mystical artifact they found one day and it transports the ordinary guy (named Jake btw) to another dimension. He meets this group of people who are copy-and-paste Dr. Stranges that master the elements.

    ThePuzzler13
    1

    • I got 0%.

      My story is about a Japanese girl named Yuzuki who is trapped in a High school with this maniac serial killer, who's pretty santanic, and traps demons inside the bodies of the ones he killed. *There's more to it, but I don't feel like writing it down, my wrist hurts like crazy.*

      NilaNila
      1

  • 0% cliche! Dang. My story is about a insane god who focused on a group of people that they wanted to killed for their own amusement. The main characters are 5 people of varying gender and age. There's a pair of teenaged orphan twins,a 15 yr old warrior, and a married couple.

    For_Narnia
    1

  • I got 10% cliche!

    Four main characters; the 'adventurous' one, the complicated one, the sociopathic person and the 'mom'. I'm pretty proud of my concept so I won't tell the full story, but i'll just say the basics. Basically, this took place 1600 ad but there's magic(this is significant to the main villain). This probably is a compilation of man vs self, with each mc getting a volume. Although, the last volume would be man vs. man which is the main villain. The villain's powers are on par with marvel comic villains, but their personality isn't just 'i'll destroy this universe because I have to avenge my father'... nonono. My story is a character-driven story, and so, detailed characters IS A MUST. For example; the villain of mine wasn't infuelnced by anyone, his/her choice is THEIRS and no one decided it for them. They made their choices my their morals, philosophies, and values... not because of their parents who needed to be avenged. Well anyways, the ending is pretty tragic for the villain... and not just because he/she died. As I said, my characters have morals and that's what made the villain's death tragic. The villain's story was a whole man vs. himself, and it can be seen in the last scene of him talking to himself (also, he died out of his own will). There're some pretty cool plot twists in the end, and i'm confident my story would blow up. Also, just a question... do you ever feel paranoid that someone would magically 'steal' your idea? That's why I only said the basics, I feel paranoid that my idea would be... snatched! I've done hard work for this story, and if does simply get snatched away... I'm just a worrywart. Anyways... just asking if this is normal and if this incident actually happens often.

    LivianTOTEMS
    1

  • 3% cliche! He he! I hate cliches, and I detest stories like that too. It's awful when people say 'it's raining cats and dogs' or you read a story with villains in towers with trolls and goblins!

    vulturemonem
    1

  • 10% cliche. Well, she IS a reincarnated goddess...but it's just a Fanfic...

    13% cliche. Second story, and this really is an original! But there isn't really a huge quest or whatnot...not really, anyway. Awesome quiz!

    liz_king97
    1

  • If anyone here has a FictionPress.com account, you can contact me (the creator of the quiz)! Name: Mr Theory

    mrtheory44
    1

  • 10%... Really? Wow. :) I thought Paranormal Love was awful. xD I guess it's more of a cliche romance story. xP

    Firey_Soul
    1

  • 7%

    I think my story is pretty solid in original elements, it's not perfect, but eh

    ceri_handen
    1

  • 20% that much? I'm ashamed lol better fix it :P

    Sunday1
    1

  • 3 percent wow my story is real life about me spying on a girl i have a crush on

    SmartB
    1

  • 0% :) Although I think it's at least 5%.

    MysteriousEntity
    1

  • 7%

    FluffyEtini
    1

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