Hogwarts Love Story | Comments
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Thanks for taking the quiz! Somehow, the last question didn't show up, so I'm just going to say a few things. One, thanks to all of the HP writers out there, especially natuhleegayle and HogwartsLove. All of you have inspired me to start writing, even though it kind of terrified me. Secondly, I know I didn't have any boys in the quiz, but I'll try to next time. I realize that I get a bit detailed sometimes and it makes for longer quizzes. Lastly, I'd really appreciate some feedback to let me know how I did. I'm planning on making Part Two soon, if I get some comments. Thanks again!
music8262 -
Keep going. Your style is good and your structure is fantastic to make for smooth reading. I love lengthy descriptions so carry on there. The first person suits this style so you're doing great there. Onto the story itself, its coming, but it's not there yet. I know that this is the first quiz so that's a little different. Generally, if I was doing a story beginning with no 'boys', then I would call it an introduction. The first parts often don't contain much love but in mine, I start it early. Keep going!!! Check out mine if you like.
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Loved it! Most of the other quizzes have you put in your own name and desired House, but this is great too! I absolutely loved it! Personnally, I'm starting in the character's 1st year, and my series is called Hogwarts Forever. I'm still working on Part 1.3 (or the third quiz), but I haven't gotten stuck yet! It's just homework that's slowing me down.
Anyway, a spectacular first quiz, I will surely comment on your others!
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@Blahh45 Though the criticism doesn't really apply here anymore, I agree with you completely. I cringe when I read parts of my early quizzes. However, the Slytherin/Ravenclaw part was less Harry-inspired and more me-inspired. I'm a Slytherclaw. :)
music8262 -
Wow! That was a smooth start! I might say I am interested about the whole Slytherin keyhole gift she received. The flow of the story was perfect! And your characterization, early for me to say since there was not much I could say about to give my opinion about them but I look forward to the next one! :)
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it was allright, I guess, it would have been better if it wasn't pretty much an exact replica of Harry's story. Parents dead, almost landing in Slytherin, staying with relatives that hate all things magic, and the relatives just waiting to get rid of you. Also, I prefer when it mentions your name it is a _______, so you can easily relate to the story more.
Blahh450 -
Very good I would rather perfer second person (acting like the person reading is the character) But its your story and its very good for a first one!
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Thanks for all of the positive feedback everyone! The next quiz will be Diagon Alley, so I'm hoping to get all of the guys in there if I can.
music8261 -
Wow, this is really good. I think it's better then my story when I first started! It was very detailed. I look forward to part 2!!
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It was pretty good! I definitely think you should keep writing!
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It's good! Keep going!
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