The Unforgiven and Unforgotten part 28 | Comments

Oh gosh. I was tryigto read this with a straight face, and I failed epically. And while I was reading this, my brother walked into my living room and I didn't wanna start bursting out laughing cause he would've looked at me weirdly. So, I slowly got up and walked upstairs to my room. And then I started laughing. XD. And I think that it's either Aaron or Jayden (we don't know where he's been the past 3 years. That's enough time to get banned). And then I think it's Aaron because he's the least expected. Well, anyways, awesome part and I can't wait for the next :D.

YAYYYY I'm finally back to my body!!! ^^ I missed Starfire so much X) *joy* although... all that time, it was really that easy to summon the gryphon? *sigh* and I had to admit, I was afraid when you first mentioned Jayden with Nutella smh, that sounds like the oddest confection ever. That boy's stomach is something else.

QOD: hm... I think it's... Aaron too

Best cliff hanger EVERRRRRRR!!!! I was laughing and grinning the whole time and my mother, who grown used to this, just smiled and shook her head. :3 this is too good. Hahhahahha Hyper high. Oh gosh I am so going to do that when I'm old enough for tequila. With Mah friends of course. Now what wuz I going to say? Oh yes: *starts chanting* under my comand I comand u to write the next one, I comand u to write te next one, I comment u to write the next one. :P Question of the Day~ Who do you think is the ex-convict that Shane was talking about? - *shruggs* I honestly don't know. Maybe someone did some very retious prank ... Or I don know. Marvelous!

Okay, I think it might be Aaron because a) he has the mark and b) It would be kind of surprising to see him in a bad light instead of the (okay i'm gunna get a little mush ball on ya *even though I like Jayden*) smart, sexy, leader he is.

Hmmm...Omar making out with a pillow? Lmfao :p

And did her powers got taken away forever or something?

Loved it an Jayden and Omar are so crazy and random, they kept me laughing through this whole part. Plz hurry and make part 29.

Loved it an Jayden and Omar are so crazy and random, they kept me laughing through this whole part. Plz hurry and make part 29.

Please come back, I love your quizzes and I hope that you would come back and continue writing

Lol SOO funny :)) Can't wait for part 29!! & YES i absolutely think you should bring Shattered lives onto here.

lol i love this series i couldn't stop laughing at jayden & omar. i think the ex-convict might be jayden cause he ended up in the prison for stealing, he could have lied about that so it didn't make him untrustable.

Soooooo amazing just finished and I LOVED IT! Please hurry with the next one I can tell it's going to be great!

i think its Aaron. its so unexpected. he's supposed to be the poster child for perfection! it'd be cool :)

Please keep writing... desperatley wanna know whats going to happen next :(

lol funniest quiz ever hurry up and make part 29

Why did she lose her powers?

Awww, I don't think Cometlight is coming back. We miss you Cometlight!!!

hey guys i just rose from the partially dead whats up? nice to see you guys too >:( make part 29 pleaseeeee?

In a later part you have to bring up the prank on jayden

when are you going to make 29 becuase i really like this book

WHERE ARE YOUU COMETLIGHT