High School Love Story Part 1 | Comments

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  • I like the story. Just try to slow it down some ok. Stretch the story out so we can learn about the characters and what's going on. Add some mystery to the guys. Please check out my story: "Supernatural: Eerie Beginnings Part 1". I would highly appreciate it! :)

    MysteriousEntity
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  • Sorry guys! I will try to get the next part out as soon as possible(probably tomorrow) and i will include your suggestions! I will try to make some of it tonight :) Thanks for taking it!

    IceBabe
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  • i hate to seem critical since im the first one to say something like this. but i honestly thot it went a little too fast with all the fast forwards and there couldve been more detail and emotion. and the naked part was really unrealistic. sorry, but overall you had a good plot line and destiny should be expelled! check out my seriesI Just Need You Here, theres a Nathan in it too!

    Ardeo9999
    1

  • What's with all the fast forwarding and blacking out? Doesn't really make you 'know' the characters and get attached and wanting for more does it?

    emoDARKangel
    1

  • This went a little too fast. I think you did like 3 days? In one part. Try to put more detail into it and you should have Evelyn (I think I spelled that right :P) fight back to Destiny. Other than that, it was really great. And I can't wait for the next part :D.

    DaughterOfApollo
    1

  • Ok everyone, Im sad to say but I cannot finish this. I am giving my account away as well, I have no time to do anything.

    My user: IceBabe
    Pass: Kortney

    IceBabe
    1

  • Oh and thanks DaughterOfApollo for taking this! I feel so honored because you are the one who inspired me...ish..

    THANK S

    IceBabe
    1

  • Awesome story!

    Athena2217
    1

  • Sorry guys for making 1-6 so short! I didn't know it would be that short. I'll work on that on my next part.

    IceBabe
    1

  • Awesome quiz part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

    Beautiful Games
    1

    • It was great, I'm fairly new here and o really want to know more, I would also love to hear from you thanks for the quiz

      Aimable
      1

  • Next Part!

    ILuvHolister
    1

  • That was awesome!!!!! U should make more of these quizes

    Animals
    1

  • That waz awesome!!!!! Plz hurry up with part 2.....CANT WAIT!!! xD

    GogoshXD
    1

  • Loved it make part 2 asan (as soon as now)

    mcqueen
    1

  • hyyhy

    icecat
    1

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