Your Love is a Lie *Part 1* | Comments

Hmm..first time I read someone's quiz without looking away from the laptop. This was truly breathtaking. I don't like the fact that the character's mother has to go throughout with such nonsense. I like the background and description. No one has ever come up with such originality in their first part of the quiz. I honestly think Lucas is a bit apprehensive because he sees that the girl doesn't talk much. He didn't join her at lunch because he was afraid to inflict his company upon her. It's quite weird that the character is a loner but I'm a sorta loner as well. I mean as I like to be myself most of time and I enjoy the use of silence as a means of communicating. I liked it and I am looking out for part two eagerly (:

I've take this quiz a second time ( coz i luv it )

and I think you should put more physical descriptions, but not as the others quiz makers : I mean, for your 2nd quiz we could that the girl names blah blah, she has hair like that and so on..., same for Lucas etc

And if they must fall in love, or maybe she will fall in love with another, try to describe her like her lover sees her, and her lover like she see him... I think it would be interesting, because a person become more beautiful when he/she is in love ...

Bye bye !!!

Great if i say so myself i agree with xxblutixx. I love how you portrayed the girls background and her family, i don't know Lucas but to me it seems he llikes the main character but he wants to fit into society but ny hanging around the main character he will never fit in, i hope my guess is correct, i'll be commenting on all your parts cant wait for part 2

The portrayal of the main character seems accurate... I'm thinking that Lucas is just uncertain about sitting to a girl that he doesn't know and doesn't want to risk being in an awkward situation by intruding on her solitude at lunch in case she doesn't want him there (since her reception wasn't exactly receptive in class). Of course, my guess at characterization may be completely wrong since we still haven't learned much about him yet. I'll definitely look out for part 2 because I want to see where you go with this.

Wow... Scary, abusive, yet captivating ... I like it :)

I LOVE IT! But its really sad poor mother im just glad my parents arent like that.. but there divorced :(

I LOVED it FANTASTIC it is very unique and different from all the other quizzes PART 2

Me gusta !

Really dark and realistic ... Good job my dear ! :-]

I would love to take the second part !

THANK YOU for making chapter 2

This is awesome, but sad... D,:

I'm back PurpleCherries when are u going to make the next one

So sad!!! But it DEFINANTLY has lots of potential :) keep it up!!

Love it! :D

WERE IS PART TWOOOOOOO D:

PArt 2! i like how unqie this story is!