Magie
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Thread Topic: Magie
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Tim climbed the wall very early in the morning. He planted the seeds around the lake and dumped all the perfume into the lake. He mixed it and Rosey fog came up from it. The morning dew from the lake now made the grass smell like roses. And the lake was a nice pinkish color. He looked around the lake. Because he planted the seeds there, the ground was dug up. So when Minerva healed the ground, the flowers would grow and bloom! He smiled, walking back to his kingdom to come back later with the present.
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Dew NewbieMinerva walked by, and when she smelled the fog started sneezing. She was distracted by seeing the dug up ground as she healed each, ignoring the flowers as that usually happened when she healed earth.
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(The fog would have died down, leaving just a slight, faint, smell of roses. Wouldn't she notice that the flowers were a specific kind, and not your everyday wild flower? And that the ground was dug up, so they were planted there? Not to mention they're planted in heart shape.)
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Dew Newbie1. Just because it leaves doesn't mean that she doesn't sneeze where it was. It sounds weird, but its true.
2. How would they acquire the seeds of there weren't any around?
3. How the f--- can she see its all heart shaped when the lakes a few miles long and shes not paying attention. Also I CLEARLY stated that it wasn't unusual for flowers to grow where she heals ground. Also she couldn't see the seeds because all seeds are brown. Ground is brown.) -
(He stole them, remember?)
(Yeah, but wouldn't she understand someone dug it up for a reason? I'm sorry if I made you mad...)
Tim came over with the present and was a little disappointed. He was hoping he'd be there when she saw the flowers. He was confused to see her unhappy, because he worked hard to make the morning perfect. -
Dew NewbieI remember, I meant the shop.
Hoy didn't, I'm just frustrated. Also there are animals around that probably dig up holes.)
Minerva wasn't unhappy. She finished, stood up and realized what the shape was, though she was really confused. -
(They went to other lands. Like you said, it wasn't just the two kingdoms.)
"Happy birthday! Uh... What's wrong?" He asked, handing her the present. He imagined he'd be sitting next to her, and she'd look at the Rosey lake water. She'd smile and heal the ground as amazing flowers bloomed around the lake! Making a wonderful scene as Tim handed her the present! Clearly, that wasn't going to happen. He felt a little annoyed that things didn't work out, but looked more concerned than annoyed. -
Dew Newbie???
Also sorry Tim, i cannot read your mind.)
Minerva jumped, turning into a tiger before laughing in a rumbling purr. "Don't scare me, Tim!" -
(How does New York get roses if none grow there naturally? How does any city?)
"Sorry. Here's your present." Tim replied, scratching the back of his head. -
Dew NewbieBecause some city's have roses there already.
Also let me make more sense:
Minerva does not give a f--- about different flowers, she doesn't know what her native flowers look like so she just assumes they're always there.)
She smiled and took it awkwardly with her paws. -
(Sorry... I guess I messed up making the romantic part I planned... But like I said. Minerva, originally named Lilly, was a lot different when I made the story...)
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Dew NewbieNo, no, im sorry, I just wish you told me what you expected of minerva and the romantic parts expected outcome so i could follow it.)
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(Okay... Sorry.)
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Dew NewbieLet's just continue.)
Minerva looked down at her present.
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