Soap, anyone?
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Thread Topic: Soap, anyone?
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Anyone?
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We could do that one.
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Okay. What shall I call the thread or we do it here?
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happypuppy?
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We can do it here. Would you like for me to post the plot again?
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Yes please
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happypuppy
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[no urls]
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Is it worth it?
This is a love triangle.
You must use capitalization and punctuation. Plus, at least 70% good spelling. Some slip ups are fine.
Your post must be detailed. It must be 10+ sentences. It must be a paragraph or more.
It's the year 3030. There is a barrier that is up. You would not know there is a barrier unless you touched it because you can't see it. The barrier is 5 cities big. So, there's plenty of space. Everything in the barrier look's like a normal cites place. A queen rules. Here are the rules and laws in the barrier;
~The officials choose. The officials are soldier like people who tell you where to go and what to do.
~You must get 2 hours of exercise a day.
~The officials control your death date on a computer. Nobody lives longer than 80 and nobody dies before that.
~If you do not look skinny then you will be taking to the Pentagon. The Pentagon is where citizens die peaceful. They die by just a touch of a button on a computer.
~If you have depression, eating disorders, mental illnesses or anything like that, you will be sent to the Pentagon.
~Everyone goes to school.
~Each meal for everyone will be held in the capital. Nobody is allowed over 1000 calories. Eat more and you will be sent to the Pentagon.
~No cars.
~No animals at all
~No sweets
~No stealing, drinking, smoking, or doing drugs. No murder. If so, you will be sent to the Pentagon for a brutal death or turned to the jail.
~Stay away from the Psycho group. The psycho group are a group of people that have done wrong and sent to jail. Their punishment is to go keep the barrier stable or go out the barrier. Outside the barrier is zombie like humans but they look and act like wolves. The psychos have to kill them. You know someone is a psycho because they have a sun tattoo on their neck and a tattoo number in their wrist.
~No dying or cutting hair.
~Wear your uniform.
~No sexual actions in public. This include hand holding and hugging.
C1 is a 17 year old girl. She's never broke any rule in her life. She has always listened to the officials and never done anything bad. She's respectful and loyal. Her parents work as doctors, So they're never home.
C2 (I would like to be C2 and C3.) is C1's best friend. They have known each other for a very long time. C2 really likes C1 and She likes him back. He just hasn't worked the nerve to tell her.
C1 decides to take a hike in the woods, by the barrier's wall. She's walking and everything seems absolutely okay. Until, the barrier slightly breaks. This isn't a real panic because this happens a lot. That's why there are psychos.
C3 is a psycho. He's done a terrible crime but nobody knows what. A creature runs inside the barrier woods. C3 goes to fight it but gets terribly hurt. His neck gets bit, taking a big piece out of it. He also gets clawed in his ribs.
C1 finds C3. She takes him back to her place and tries to save him. However, she discovers he's a psycho. This is very bad. If anyone catches them, they both will be brutally killed. C3 hides and heals in C1's place. After he is healed, he must hurry back to his job. However, he still breaks rules and goes back to visit C1 because he starts to love her. She likes him back. Nobody can ever find this out. Will C1 choose C2 or C3?
Use this character sheet ~~~
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Okay thanks. G2G right now, but tomorrow>>?
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But thanks a lot
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that reminds me of a book.
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