warrior cat soap??
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Thread Topic: warrior cat soap??
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Animelover9 Noviceok so this was when bluestar was a kit. the forest was peacful but then wolves came to the forest. starclan picked two cats from each clan to go were the moon rise and talk to nightmare.
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Animelover9 Noviceplz.......
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Just some advice, people will want to soap with you if you use proper grammar. Bluestar and Nightmare should be capitalized because they're names. You also might want to explain your plot a little more. People will want to know who Nightmare is, and why he/she can save the clans.
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Animelover9 Novice1. thanks for the advice
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She has a point. Flesh out your plot, yo. Make it more interesting and detailed, thus giving it more personality and depth. Most people look for that in a soap.
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Cherrywhisker 2 NewbieI'll soap wth u. BUT use some grammar Anime.
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