Mermaids of Crystal Waters
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Thread Topic: Mermaids of Crystal Waters
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(@Keznya: Well, it's hard when I have a lot on my mind and my friends and I are nice and love to make stories together. One person says one sentence and the other person says the next and we can do anything we want to try to make the story more interesting, so SORRY for making the story more interesting! Also, if I don't reply I'm not on. No need to spam the whole page with frustration notes!)
I stared as Opal and Meg swam towards Kook, the Siren.
(@Keznya: They already said in there sentences that they swam towards Kook. You happy? The story line didn't change!) -
@GinnyGirl: Why did you kill my own character?!! I think I will choose his fate, thank you.)
Everything was a blur. Blood. Murk. Mermaids.
Kook groaned hoarsely and just barely managed to rubbed his sore arm. Well, down to the wrist...
"Oh my gosh!" shrieked the Siren. "My hand! H-he bit my hand off!" He hadn't noticed the swelling pain until the raging shark had zoomed away along the ocean currents.
He winced in pain, then seeing all the sympathetic mermaids gathered around him. -
Sorry i understand that. But you didnt have to blow up on me. You could have changed the scene easily I tried to make to where it was your choice. I just want to play my player that's IT. I appreciate that you want it to be exciting but usally on roleplay people play their on player. I really am not wanting to sound me but it is starting to frustrate me.)
Odessa whirled around to look at Muyta, then decid she wanted to go, untill she saw Kook wrestling the shark.She watched with amazement and thought he would actually win -
I stared in shock as the Siren's hand was bit off. I turned and swam away. I swam all the way into Mermaid territory and pushed my back up against the beautiful crystal rock. I slid down the tall rock until I hit the ocean floor. I grabbed my hair and twirled it with a frantic speed. I couldn't get the bloody image of my mind.
(Let's all just be friends! I'm tired of fighting and hearing everyone fight. Kook, you don't have to die. Opal please don't say he dies unless he wants to quit. You can make something exciting happen though. Let's just sign a Peace Treaty and all be friends!) -
Okay. Yes, we should all just be friends! Jazzy, you seem really fun ;3 pleased to meet you! Let's just say Kook didn't die; he just lost a hand, is all.)
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(yay! I didn't want Kook to die. It wasn't right. I think Kook was just an innocent Siren trying to save a mermaid. I was planning somethine too. )
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*something
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Whoops I obviously posted late lets say that was sent before his hand was off :/ )
Odessa was shocked ' ok yea Odessa he won but there was a concequense!!!!' -
I stopped fiddling with my hair and curled my tail up. I decided what I should do next. I couldn't tell anyone though. I swam straight into CCC and in through the window of my home.
(I can't tell you guys what's coming! It'll be a shocker!) -
Odessa
' I can't just swim still but what can I do? Oh Ill just go home!'
Odessa swam as fast as she could home with all kind of thoughts flooding her mind.
" This has been a horrible, horrible day" -
I paused with my coral bag in my hand. I turned around and looked at the Oceana, the beautiful city of The Atlantic Ocean. I turned around and bumped into Odessa. Startled, I didn't speak.
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Odessa
Oh sorry Mutya, I think it has been a rough day for everyone, I can not wait untill night fall. -
Are you going somewhere?
*Eyeing the coral bag*
I need something to get mind off of today if you are. -
(Lol I don't know if I was writing in 3rd or 1st person!)
Aqua swam towards all the commotion and saw K have his hand bit off. Aqua shrieked and once the shark swam away she swam up to Kook. "K? Are you okay?" She asked frantically. She looked around and saw a female Siren swim up. The siren floated beside her. "Is there anything we can do?" Aqua asked, tears running freely down her cheeks. K, she thought, Whatever you do, don't die! -
I looked at Odessa and sighed. "Yea," I replied reluctantly. I looked down and scratched my arm. "I was just heading out. I needed to pick up a few things." I said. I started swimming towards the exit when I felt something was wrong.
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