You Cant Wake Up
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Thread Topic: You Cant Wake Up
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so it revolves around a group of characters (protagonists), a prophecy (plot twist), and heaven (antagonists)
however, the prophecy is false and heaven is false as well (main plot twist). the heaven isn't necessarily a place but rather a higher power; they can't communicate through the physical realm but through dreams when the body is in a "spiritual" state
im tryna figure out the foundation of it all, like what would be the false heaven's motives for giving a false prophecy? what would the prophecy be?
the prophecy would needa be smth that seems morally correct and noble to the protagonists since they'd be unaware heaven is against them, and they'd be unaware the prophecy is false. it can't tell of 'heaven itself', because again, the prophecy is made up BY the false heaven -
i make mistakes of focusing on a large picture but its better to walk in the character's shoes and take each step at a time. so, walking from both at the same time, two important questions are asking
char 1. what is the prophecy, being morally correct from a blind perspective?
char 2. what is false heaven's motives for giving this false prophecy? -
obviously you'd think it would be about keeping the world in stasis so the false heaven's power will never be under threat, but i feel like thats too predictable
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i want the viewers to be shocked at the plot twist, so the foundation is making it unpredictable. so it'd be better to keep heaven out of the spotlight, make one character seem suspicious of it and make THEM seem like the antagonist
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what am i doing i still have to get school done 💀
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I probably need to start using proper grammar because I can smell the CEOs of Grammarly raising their fists from a mile away
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I see Grammarly as more of a threat 👀 their goal is to ultimately erase slang from the human dictionary and make humans succumb to their vocabulary. I can NOT stand for that
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absolutely not. nuh uh
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*Absolutely
*Nuh -
grammarly's infecting me oh my gosh i stared at the TOS for too long A
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WHAT AM I DOING I STILL NEED TO GET SCHOOL DONE 💀
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"You"
"Your mom"
"nuh uh"
"yuh uh"
"You"
"Me 😏"
"Stfu"
"Shut th"
"Water"
"H2O"
"Aqua"
"Dihydrogen monoxide"
"Wæter"
"Watah"
"*Water"
"Puddle juice"
"*Walter"
"JESSE"
"I KNEW IT, SHE'S NOT JUST A COWORKER 😡"
"SHE'S YOUR MOM"
"I AM THE ONE WHO KNOCKS"
"I am not in danger, skyler, I am the danger"
"Hey you, you're finally awake"
"You were trying to cross the border, right?"
"Any askers?"
"Askers who?"
"whag"
"Wag"
"I disagree"
"No"
im crying this is actually the best conversation ive ever had -
still needa get school done but got sum subjects done :D math is boring asf tho
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my brain is having a stroke, a seizure, and an aneurysm combined what do i dooooo
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IM GOING TO SMOKE THE ECONOMY BY BECOMING A BILLIONAIRE IF SCHOOL DOESN'T CANCEL RIGHT AT THIS MILLISECOND 😡
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