coffee shop thread
- Locked due to inactivity on Sep 20, '17 3:54am
Thread Topic: coffee shop thread
-
I'm tryna improve it and add more singing but idk what 2 put??
-
Updated Cynthia Verse:
(Spoken word)
Did someone say shots?
Hold my drink.
(Rap)
I lost all my friends
And all I'm seeing is tens
Don't diss me
For acting slutty
But you're super hot
And I'm a tad tip-sy
Aaaaah!
(Spoken Word)
One more shot!
Guzzle, guzzle!
Pass that!
Give me that sweet sensation and-
(Spoken Word)
Feel on me!
Kiss me!
Rock me!
Let's go to-
Indigo: No, let's go. -
Indigos verse so far:
Did you know-
Company: No!
Did you see-
Co: No!
Have you heard-
Co: No!
This is useless,
I'm a killjoy,
A total nuis-acne.
Running from wolves,
Can I survive?
Dancing with knives,
They are chancing,
Betting their lives.
It's only a question,
Nothing more.
I'm asking their confession
Or we're done for.
We need justice
To end this immorality.
Or no one is to be trusted
In the face of brutality. -
Updated rap part of Indigo's verse (the intro stays the same):
This is useless,
I'm a killjoy,
A total nuisance,
I'm running to thrive,
To stay alive,
Dancing with knives,
They are chancing,
Betting their lives.
It's only a question,
Nothing more.
I'm asking their confession
Or we're done for.
We need this justice
To end this immorality.
Or no one is to be trusted
In the face of brutality.
We need a cessation
Of this segregation
Before being lead to our devastation.
Unity is indispensable
Anything otherwise is insensible.
Cooperation is a must
In times of distrust.
And in times of duplicity
We mustn't give into toxicity. -
Updated Complete Scene 3 Song: (Which I named "One More")
Indigo:
Did you know-
Co: No!
Did you see-
Co: No!
Did you hear-
Co: No!
This is useless
I'm a killjoy
A total nuisance
I'm running to thrive,
To stay alive.
Dancing with knives
They are chancing,
Betting their lives.
It's only a question,
Nothing more.
I'm asking their confession.
Or we're done for.
We need this justice
To end this immorality.
Or no one is to be trusted
In the face of brutality.
They separate us like
We are black and white
When we are quite alike
Due to our universal plight
We are one in our common panic
Wielding the gun,
The man is manic.
We are all on the run
From the same man.
Yet we segregated ourselves
And that's where our dilemma began.
We need a cessation
Of this segregation
Before being lead to our devastation.
Unity is indispensable,
Anything otherwise is insensible.
Cooperation is a must
In times of distrust.
And in times of duplicity
We mustn't give into toxicity.
Charles:
(Spoken Word): So there's this girl. And dude like:
Rap:
Indigo, she's like a dream
I gotta chase.
Even though she's a bit extreme
She's full of grace.
She puts me in a daze
Every time I see her face!
She sets me ablaze
With passion and infatuation.
Don't think of this as a sick
Type of flirtation.
And I'm not very slick,
And I can't say this to her face but-
I just can't keep my mouth shut!
She's a dame,
A doll of porcelain,
Purer than a virgin,
Hotter than Madonna.
She's my person,
My paradise, my nirvana.
She pushes me,
Aids me to succeed.
Making my heart bleed.
She's putting me in pain
And I'm a love ameateur
But she's always on my brain
And I think I love her.
Cynthia:
Did someone say shots?
Indigo, hold my drink.
Indigo: No, let's go. -
ya boi is back!!! yes!!
im finally in the mood to help w this... so we have 3 songs:
1. alright, alright
2. that one where charles complains
3. one more
oh damn
i have a suggestion though:
these are 3 high schoolers trying to solve a murder. dont you think we should make some high schooler s--- the intro, and kinda just stick it around? for feels, y'know, and plot bunnies. -
Wdym by that? Ryan is very easily confused you must understand this
-
so like tje gang r some highschool weebs
& yknow heathers and dear evan hansen and be more chill have high school s---?
WE NEED SOME HIGH SCHOOL s--- -
LIKE MORE HS DRAMA?? Is that what you mean?
-
YES EXACTLY
-
YEAH WE SHOULD ADD HIGH SCHOOL BICKERING TO THE FIRST SONG IN THE BEGINNING
like
Cynthia: Oh my god did you hear that Mary Anne Craw-
Indigo: Yes, we get it Cynthia she hooked up wi-
Charles: Chad Irwin. Heard it already.
Indigo: Bo-ring -
YES
-
We should make Charles act like a total drama king (queen? Idk)
-
yes
drama queen
bisexy -
Totally
P lit
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.
