REVISION ADVICE
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Thread Topic: REVISION ADVICE
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Stop making me smile so much, LOL! Thank you Bunnies. And I'll say thank you now, Charlie because I know you're going to say something sweet.
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You are welcome.
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Whats your full name roady?
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How can you thank people as great and as sweet as this? LOL.
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You know me well, don't you?
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Thank you. By letting them make you smile more. That's a start.
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Roetha Humaid Saeed Ahmed Sulaiman Almarri.
But my name in Arabic almost spells out the word "Feeling", if my name began with an 'A'
So instead of "Ihsas" its "Rahsas"
And Ihasas means feeling. -
Roeth
Book 4: Underground monsters
3 years later, she is now a disgraced vampire slayer, when she hears that a duke named Duke Shale (Originally Simon) wants to duel with her because she is making a disgrace of vampire hunters.
She gets fed up because she's disgraced by not being a vampire hunter from a vampire hunting family, and when she is a vampire hunter she's making a disgrace of vampires, so she goes to the castle, not knowing that it's her home, there, a necklace was cursed never to go in there (it was the ruby necklace she found in the diary), so when she goes wearing it, she is forced down in to the underground world, a monster had taken her there, there are four doors, well five, but one needs a key from each other door, where an element monster awaits, fire, water, air and earth, she gets the keys and goes up, she loses the fight, but finds out that the mansion is her home and he is her brother.
OK, so she goes wearing the necklace with him knowing, you see in book 6, the necklace is no longer cursed, and it shows her visions of the castle's past, she didn't know the monster was saving her, and she killed it so the necklace's curse was set free (need some sad parts) so when she comes up, duke Shale tricks her and runs off like a coward and in the end she swears to come back. -
Thanks Roady! i just needed to know what author to look for in the upcoming years
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That's a beautiful name. My full name is Charles Nicholas Pile. It sounds really bad doesn't it? Be honest.
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LOL, maybe now actually, I'm writing a singular book and my mother promised me she'd send it to a publisher, so you could mean actually in 1 or 2 years, and not 10 or 15. xD
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I like your surname Charlie, but Charles doesn't match up with Pile, if your name didn't have an 'S' at the end it would have been better.
I'm honest all the time. ^_^ -
Charlie, it doesn't sound thatbad, but it just doesn't ring
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Very captivating plot. I'm normally not interested in vampire stories, but this sounds like a must read.
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Yeah, like I said, if his name didn't have an 'S' at the end it would have been fine.
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