UM...
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Thread Topic: UM...
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Typo!
I woke up on the train station. All night I was traveling on a train to Colorado, where I wanted to start a new life. -
i got to the nearest hotel i could find.
50$ a night,called thge Nightway Express -
I was exausted. My parents were probably searching for me back in Philidelphia. I got up, and took a newspaper that was on the chair beside me.
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i lied on the bed,tired bored,next thing tommorow,i was gonna start a new life
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There were no jobs I could qualify for, so I put it in the trash. I decided to start the search for a new life tomorrow. I walked out of the train station, and settled in the cheapest hotel I could find, the Nightway Express.
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i sat therew reading the paper,then it thought
why would i need a job? i'm starting a new life,new everything,there isn't a reason.
i threw the paper(now crushed in a ball)on the floor -
I wished that I had brought Jon along, but then I thought that it would be better for him to stay with mom and dad until I found a job and a good place to live in.
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i walked down the hall until i bumped into someone
(ur them)
"uh sorr..."
it then hit me
"HEY! watch were your going!"
that didn't feel good though
"sorry...trying to escape,make it diffrent" -
"Umm...okay then..." I said, and continued walking down the hall to my room.
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somthing about her,just ....i don't know,she seemed firmilier.
"wait,hold on"
i said turning on -
(Turning on what?)
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(TYPO! turning around)
"i'm Elton,who are you?" -
"Why should I tell a stranger my name?" I said, scowling at Elton.
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"i am sorry miss,i didn't mean to...intrude?"
i had already forgot english skills,so strange -
"You better me." I said, swinging my hair behind my back and walking away.
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