help me design an anime character
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Thread Topic: help me design an anime character
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Name: Madoka Togami
Age: 18 years old
Gender: Female
Birthday: May 5th (Taurus)
Height: 5'10
Weight: 54 kg (120 lbs)
Title: Super High School Level Physician
Family: Byakuya Togami (younger brother)
Appearance: Madoka shares similar physical attributes as her brother, Byakuya - deep blonde hair, pointed turquoise eyes and a slim, tall body figure. She is usually seen with a hairpin of the Togami family emblem on her head, a golden necklace and bracelet on each wrist, white-framed glasses, a strapless black dress with a white labcoat over top, white legwarmers and black flats.
Personality: Madoka's personality isn't too far apart from her brother's. She shares her sense of arrogance and belief of superiority over others, although is a pinch more open to try new things, and a quirky girl at heart. She upholds a professional behavior, holding strong dislike to most things messy and unorganized. Mostly anti-social, she shuts herself in from people, except from her closest friend, Mikan Tsumiki. She can sometimes be kind-hearted in nature and more lively when expressing her opinions and likes. Secretly a punk-rock lover, Madoka owns a shiny, red electric guitar and a drumset, and preferably, when she is alone (and her brother isn't home), she likes to practice her music. Her singing voice has improved, although most of her singing voice is used for screamo.
History: Long ago, Madoka was "killed". In the Togami group, this was more personally known as "being exiled from the family". Becoming quite jealous of her brother becoming the successor instead of she, she bribed her brother in order for her to stay under his hospitality and live with him, especially since she has nowhere to go. Madoka still considered herself a Togami though, since she and her brother are the only set of siblings to be full-blooded, born-in Togami's. Since then, the two lived together, and her brother would always charge her 100,000 dollars to keep living with him for another month. Coming from a rich family, Madoka had no problem with this, as her personal banking account has just as much money as her brother's, being updated constantly by her servicemen, also granted by Byakuya. And sometimes, she can use her title of "Byakuya Togami's sister" to her advantage, since the name "Madoka Togami" was discarded from the popularity of the public due to her exile. In Danganronpa: Another Episode, Madoka is a minor character and serves apart of the Future Foundation as a technical researcher and doctor.
Relationships:
Byakuya Togami - It appears that Madoka and Byakuya hate each other to the extreme, and try to avoid each other as much as possible. When they do interact, it is most likely to get involved with a heated argument with each other, and sometimes they will even strike each other physically. But in Danganronpa: Another Episode, they apologize to each other for the things they've done and embrace. It is later shown that their relationship improves and they become more tolerant of each other, even asking each other how their days have been.
Extra Trivia:
- The golden necklace along with the set of bracelets she wears was given to her by her brother on her 8th birthday. The jewelry set is secretly her most prized possession and she refuses to give it back to Byakuya, as much as he keeps asking her to.
- Madoka has severe OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder) and the thought of disorganization makes her freak out.
- She clearly enjoys candy and other sweet things, as well as some other unhealthy food items, despite the fact that she is a medical professional. Whenever she has time, she takes some sweets from her secret stash and eats them. -
I also forgot to add the fact that Madoka and Byakuya are fraternal twins. c:
so, whaddya guys think -
pls
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just give me feedback pls
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Can I draw this? I'm bored. ouo
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Yeah, sure.
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Bumping. More people are on.
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HoneySenpai NewbieI adore the drawing.I love how much detail you used in the description,too.
Feedback;
I freaking love her.She's not an annoying Mary Sue.She's original. Good job. ^-^ -
I love her. The drawing could use some work, but great.
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Thank you. I appreciate the feedback.
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HoneySenpai Newbie(ignore last post)
Actually,I do have a few complaints.
Why is she related to a canon character?
That makes her a f---ing Mary sue.Oh my f---ing god.
Why does she have a sad backstory?
f---ing Mary sue.
Why is she pretty much perfect?
That's not realistic.Nobody's perfect.f---ing Mary sue.
Rating: f---ing 0/10
She's a f---ing Mary sue
Disappointing -
I rushed a little bit in the drawing. I didn't draw the hands because those are the worst, and I can agree that the feet are a little crooked and her hair looks a tad uneven. Thank you.
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She does seem a bit Mary-Sue-ish to me. Sad backstory, related to a canon character, described as quirky, yet her personality seems very predictable.
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HoneySenpai NewbieShe needs to have atleast more realistic features.(sorry if I was harsh)
Examples:
-She could be slightly chubby (you don't have to make her)
-She could have a happier backstory (omfg she was "killed" -_-)
-Give her a different personality,instead of her being a f---ing carbon copy of togami
-Give her more distinguishing marks (freckles,scars,tattoos,anything that'll stand out) -
Google Definition: See Mary-Sue. A female fanfiction character who is so perfect as to be annoying.
She isn't perfect. She is an anti-social shut-in who has no friends except for one. She gets into arguments with her brother and even got a few scars from him. She has nowhere to go and practically mooches of of her brother. She was exiled from her family and is completely unpopular. Her only reasoning for having private servicemen is due to her former title of a Togami and that Byakuya had too many, so he gave some of them away, and he couldn't find anybody else to give them to but his sister. There are other things that I can list that are flaws of hers.
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