A Deadly Love
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Thread Topic: A Deadly Love
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This is a story about a girl and a boy. Boy meets girl; girl meets boy, and their fates are forever changed. But this is not your typical love story. In fact, this is far from it. Most loves end happily, no? The end is near, and it is not light and fluffy. The story of Axel and Jo will bring you down, rake open your heart, and leave you crying for mercy. It will leave you emotionally scarred for as long as you live, and thereafter.
~ Alana
READ ON…..IF YOU DARE….
Chapter 1
All I could remember was the pain. The agonizing, scrutinizing pain. My heart racing, pounding faster every second. I couldn’t think. I could only scream and cry, choking on my tears as I struggled through the hurt. I’d chosen this for myself. Yet every second closer to the end made me want to turn back. But what did I have left for me here? Just an abusive father, dead mother, and homicidal brother. No friends. No live. No mercy.
That’s when I felt myself drift away, and the pain started to disappear, kind of like how your mind clouds over after you drink a huge helping of vodka or booze. I knew what I was leaving behind. I wanted to go. And then I was completely gone. Dead. I saw my body lying on the bathroom floor, wrists slit, covered in blood. Then everything went black....
that's the foreword and 1st chapter. i've written 5 so far, so i'll be sure to keep you posted. what do you think? feedback and suggestions are appreciated!!!!
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D: no1 likez it.. i knew it... :(
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its really good sorry about not commenting sooner i had to read it and then my love got on (slim)
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lolz itz k! thanks shady! u go hav fun wit slim if hes still on :) young luv is great isnt it? lolz!
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