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Chapter One
My newly began Life
Hello, I am Mindona Elliot. I am age 10, and a 5th grader at Millsbird Elementary School. I have fire red hair, the length is to my elbows. I am 4.9 in height, and I have paper pale skin.
I have red freckles on my face, and light blue colored eyes. I have three siblings, that look nothing like me, or each other.
I am third oldest, the oldest, age 17 is Jack, he has light brown hair, and brown eyes, very tanned skin, no freckles, and is in Franklelots College.
Then there is Adreannah, who is 12, Bronze hair, up to her shoulders, and a couple freckles, palish skin, and is a 7th grader at Litmath Juinior High.
Then me, next is Jesse, age 6, he has brown hair, blue eyes, tan skin, and a 1st grader at Millsbird Elementary School.
As I said, we look nothing like each other. At least the others, look like UncleDrake and our parents. I swear, I am adopted.
I have this weird shape on my wrist, its hard to hide. And sometimes when I am mad things explode, or fly out at me, and I have these crazy nightmares too.
And whenever somebody tries to cut my hair, it grows right back if I do not like the way it looks, its crazy. That is some of the reasons I think I am an adopted child.
Okay I am gonna get on to where everything happened on my first day of school summer five.
"Mindona!Jesse! Adreannah! Get up and ready for school!"My Mom, Linda yelled up the stairs into mine, Jesse's and Adreannah's bedrooms.. I tossed in bed 'School already?' I thought. I got out of bed, and made my bed, I went to my closest, which is filled of the latest styles.... To my Mom.
I put on this shirt with a light pink and purple star on it, and some short jeans. I went to my mirrior, and decided to put my hair in braids. I went downstairs and sat at the table, like always, I am the first child there. My Mom gave me some waffles and I ate as fast as I could, to tell the truth, I think school is a bit fun sometimes. After I finished eating, and as soon as the others got there. I went to brush my teeth, I always had healthy teeth. I finished brushing my teeth, and checked my cellphone, no new messages. I went to get my book bag when all the lights in the house turned off, I went over to the light switch, seeing if I could turn it on. I have always been afraid of the dark since I was 9. The most scariest thing happened to me. I will tell you later.... The ground started to rumble and shake. We never have earth quakes in London! The house started to shake harder, I started screaming. I heard the others screaming to, and my Dad came down the stairs and picked me up. He went to sit in a doorway I noticed the others were too, Jesse with Mom and Adreannah with Uncle Drake. All the kids but me were screaming. I all the sudden stopped screaming so I could think straight.
But the next thing I knew, the same shape, the same figure, came out of my favorite chair behind my Dad. The same figure, of the thing I seen when I was 9.... I stared at it.. I stared at it.... I started to lose my feeling. And my dad was yelling my name and shaking me... as everything came all blurry and in flashes. Then, I noticed the earthquake stopped and the lights turned on and the thing disappeared. After a few more shakes the feeling came back, but everyone was staring at me. Not what I was staring at.
I stood up and walked to the door and got my book bag and ran out the door. With my family still staring at me.
What had happened back there that made my family stare at me like that? I didn't do anything but lose my feeling of my body. What if my soul came out for a moment? What if that happens again? I started asking myself in thoughts. I noticed I was in class by then. And I was getting my supplies out of my bag. My best friend came over. "Hi.... Did you experience the horrible quake this morning Mindona?" Revun said, he is my best bud. I nodded yes. But then the lights turned off again and every girl but me screamed, even my teacher screamed. What good is screaming gonna do if it doesn' t hurt or scare anybody or anything thats trying to get you? I questioned myself in thought. The earth started to shake and rumble harder then ever and I feel down to my knees, and started screaming. For two reasons, A. My mouth started to bleed and come out everywhere. B. The ground was shaking and rumbling so hard that I just to fall. I started to close my eyes but forcing them to stay open. The quake stopped, I stopped screaming but was trying hard to stay awake.... My teacher screamed at the site of me and sent Revun to get the nurse. I was crying in pain and holding onto my jaw at the same time. Somehow I hit my head and my head started to get the warm feeling of blood. I screamed. I was in so much pain. I was begging myself to die. I started seeing white specks in my visions. "I... am dying..." I made out before I started shaking as hard as the earthquake "Keep fighting Mindona, we know you can..." My teacher said. It took me till then to notice the lights didn't turn on... I seen the figure. right in front of my face. I tried to release myself from its stare I screamed more then ever, and shooked. The teacher noticed the thing in front of me and screamed her lungs out. And she fainted. Everyone else was trying to get me away from the thing since I seemed to be its victim right now.
I sobbed harder when the nurse came in and started nursing the teacher first. I was in a much worst shape then her. The thing touched my head and pounded my face into the floor. The other kids screamed " GET AWAY FROM HER YOU MONSTER!!!!" Yelled Revun. I watched him jump right on the figure but at the same time I felt pain in my leg. The thing was cutting my leg! Then the lights came on. I was reliefed and I noticed my breathing was coming in short fast gasps; the nurse noticed me in the middle of waking up the picture, and gasped and then when people starred at the part of me she was looking at they gasped. I noticed it was my wrist they were staring at. I could'nt look at the wrist unless if I wanted to smash my face again. I somehow was able to get into a position where I could reach my bookbag and grab my cellphone, I was still fighting the pain as hard as I could. I dialed only three numbers.... 911.... Who else should I call. I put the phone up to my ear. "Hello? Hello?" The nice lady at the answering machine said. I couldn't answer. I could speak. The only thing I could do, but barely, was breath.
Revun noticed I wasn't talking, so He grabbed the phone from me. "Hello, we need a police and a ambulance." Revun said.
The lady said something. "Millsbird Elementary School. Classroom five." Revun said in respond.
The lady said something then Revun hung up and stared at me into my eyes.
He look like he was about to cry at the look of me all bloody. I stared back, trying to show him there is nothing to worry about.
I noticed something then. I noticed something I never did within the 9 of my 10 years of life I have known him.
He had a shape on his chin, very hard to see, it was a shape of a cloud. I just have this feeling, that its gonna be awhile before everything is back to normal for him. Maybe forever.
He kepted on staring at me, and when the people came, he begged them to let him go. The people stared at him. And for the first time, I noticed he was hurt too. Not as bad as me.
But close enough. The people aloud it. Because he was crawling around like he couldn't use his feet. They raised me and him on a stretcher and we were off.
On the way to the hospital. Oh boy you do not wanna know! I'll tell you anyway for those action lover readers.
There was another earthquake! I have no idea how bad! All I know is that we got into a accident and I got knocked out!
But when I woke up I was in shock. In shock that I was alive. In shock about where I was.
I looked around the room. I seen a nurse. She had some kind of stick in her hand. And instead of paper, there were parchment.
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damnnn! holy fuk that iz long
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DarkMatter NewbieIs this a soap opera or real. It seems to good to actually be true.
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o.O
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I wrote it, going to my dream to be a author!
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Woah,the person sounds like me,like the hair,skin,eyes,and I also have freckles...
It was good by the way. -
Im also 10 years old and in 5th grade.
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you sound like a whiney girl. jk. its nice to meet u. :D
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Keren NewbieWow! great story! whew!
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i was toooooo lazy to read that looooooooooooooong poooost
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lol me too.
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i got bored after you being suppositly being adopted
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lol thats where i stopped!
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