Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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Eh,I made it in first or third grade.
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aww[no urls] it will get better felicia!! as your relationship gets stronger..... you guys get closer. how long have u been with jake?
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Felicia1 NoviceWell on June 4 it will be our one year anniversary.
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Shut up with your f---ing relationships no one gives a f--- about, if you wanna talk about it, go to the dating and relationships forum.
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Felicia1 NoviceI was just answering a question.Jeez!
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good for u hikaru... cool pic by the way. what is it? a purple smoking skull? anyway it seems awesome...
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No, it's from We Butter The Bread With Butter's album Das Monster Aus Dem Shrank, but now it's the logo for Job For A Cowboy.
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... sorry.... the pic was small... anyway both are cool.
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haha.... i made up part of a song..... XD its bad... but thats cuz i havent pieced together the lines to their true potential ok.
ooo oooooo ooooo
o o ooooo ooo ooooh
i walk along this empty street
and all i see is your face staring back at me
the sky is turning gray
and our love seems like it happened yesterday
i used you and you used meeee
we're such frienemies noooow
cant you see?
we were never meant to be
but my heart still shines bright for yooouuuu
it was overrr we had no choooiiiice
now your broken
it feels like such a sin
to be aliiive when youre not here
dont come back, get away, you heard me
your eyes burn into the back
of my head
i try to avoid you but you keep comin baaack
and im lost behind
have i lost my mind?
just remember i'll never forget u....
(guy and girl singing) but i need toooooo get you outta my head
while youre sticking around i wish i could be dead
my mind is twisted,
and so is yours,
i'd never forget you... so i swore....
is that a good ending or should i extend it????
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when i was singing that figuring out the pitches i actually cried. when i write sad songs the pitches make it emotional and i cry.... that last line: i'd never forget you.... so i swore.... means that they swore they wouldnt forget eachother... but eventually they did. get how its sad???
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well???????? what do you think of it??? (if u dont like it say it nicely please. =])
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Felicia1 NoviceI like it but maybe add some more lines to the ending to say exactly wat they swore.So when people hear the song they will know right there and then.(Not in a rude way)Do you get where I`m coming from?Cause then if you explain it to ppl they are not going to get y you didn`t put it in the song any way.
Sorry if something sounded kind of rude but I wasn`t trying to make it sound rude. -
I hate sad lovey dovey songs, but, I guess it was good.
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I made a new quiz called "Are you BOOM! or BANG!?"
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I took it, rated and commented, I got BOOM! I loved your quiz.
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