Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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Hmm... That was very nice Biance, it rocked like f---... I never knew that someone from the other side who doesn't even know how I look like had feelings for me...
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Thanks Roady.
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i think everyone has feelings for everybody... whether positive or not so positive we all gotta like eachother a little bit... XD
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Yeah...that is right.
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so i wrote a song bout alana... heres the first couple lines. its with acoustic guitar.... its really bad... but i will share it anyway...
your eyes sparkle like the sun shines in them, your hair blows in the wind, your laugh lightens up my day. (these are just bits of verses. i havent reallymade a real song out of them yet) these are some things i will include in the chorus:
and i stare into your eyes, and i suddenly know youre the one, and when our lips finally meet, the whole world caves in, and all i see is you.
yah... those are just some jumbled around lines that im gonna put in the song. tell me what you think... wow its hard to put alana into words.... i know! i can also play her the song on her birthday! thats perfect.... that will give me time to fix it up into a good one... not just a bunch of jumbled words... and phrases... any ideas how to make this into a song? -
Hmmmmmmm...I have no ideas. But if I have some,I'll tell you. [;)]
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Oh forgot. There is no winking smiley. Well that stinks.
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its good that u made one up though. maybe they wil make one. jeez... im so obsessed with Soul Sister by Train. im listening to i for the 29th time.... jeez... it just reminds me of alana you know???
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Felicia1 NoviceI just finished writing a new song called "Find You" its for this guy I really really like and I miss him a lot and this song shows emotionally how much I miss and love him so here it is.
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Felicia1 NoviceVerse 1:Whats right with this scene
I`m lost in this world,thinking of you
Feelings of insanity and despair
A dream is gone
A love so strong
Chorus:I miss you
I`ll do whatever it takes to see you again
I`ll go through deserts and mountains
I`ll sail the oceans
Cause since I love you this bad
I`m gonna find you
Verse 2:A big chunk taken out of my heart
It`s all gone
Cause I gave it to you
Hopefully now you will know
That I will always love you
Chorus:I miss you
I`ll do whatever it takes to see you again
I'll go through deserts and mountains
I`ll sail the oceans
Cause since I love you this bad
I`m gonna find you
Transition:Months,weeks and years
Blood,sweat and tears
Here you are
Handsome and strong
I didn`t know what I would have done without you.
Chorus:I missed you
I did whatever it took to see you again
I went through deserts and mountains
I sailed the oceans
Since I loved you this bad
Cause I love you so baAad
Since I loved you this bad
I found you -
Felicia1 NoviceI hope you guys liked it and please say nice things cause it came from the heart.And this IS all based on true emotions.
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I wrote a song before, but i trashed it, the only thing I remember about it, was the last line said "Go f--- yourself" lol!
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Felicia1 NoviceWow so wat did you think about my song?
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I loved it! It was beautiful! Nice song, Felicia!
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Felicia1 NoviceThanks its to this guy named Jacob.He is just soooooo funny and adorable.Very athletic too!
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